A Poem by DarkArtz 2811

but not okay


I'm okay

but I'm not okay

I hear what they say

every single f**ked up day

but if you ask baby

I'm just going to say I'm okay

I can't be that guy

I cant be the one

no matter how hard I try

the demons always won

screaming a tune

before I'm gone so soon

people say it

people poison me

I found a fit

and they took him away from me

I'm sorry I didn't say

I love you every day

© 2017 DarkArtz 2811

Author's Note

DarkArtz 2811
up set and dying inside right now

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If you wanted to make it longer the first stanza could be like a chorus and I feel like that would tie the top and bottom together better

Posted 1 Year Ago

I hope you feel better. Great poem.

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh my god I LOVE THIS POEM!! very wonderfully worded and I just 👏👏👏 Applause. I’m always here if you ever need anyone to talk to~

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DarkArtz 2811

1 Year Ago

thank you thank you thank you

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Added on November 1, 2017
Last Updated on November 1, 2017


DarkArtz 2811
DarkArtz 2811


people judge what they cant handle. I judge what I can't help. every second was painful enough... but to relive it.... it kills me. more..