Damned to sin

Damned to sin was my idea, however I would like to think Dr. Rick Puetter, for helping me with the story line and choice of words. ~S. D. Blankenship

I wrote this for you the one I knew,

but now I'm Damned from you too.

And now true love is lost with pain,
Damned am I and she is my bane.

You left me for someone that's new,
Damned am I, my dreams I eschew.

We loved this way every day,
Damned am I, loves most feeble prey! 

You laughed as you ripped out my heart,
Damned am I now that we're apart.

You are impaired most fleshly lust,
Damned am I, my passion now rust. 
 
I loved you and only you alone,
Damned am I and bereft my throne.  

For you alone my heart doth ache,
Damned am I, how my world doth shake. 

I miss her smile, her lips, and eyes so blue,
Damned am I that her love was not so true. 

I have great pain while she is well,
I know I'm damned, my life is Hell.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tai Chi Italy]

Ah I see a love issue approaching.....the reason you feel like this, is precisely because you feel and that is the key to being human imo. We have to take the rough with the smooth on our journey, sometimes it is hell on earth and then again sometimes it is pure bliss, an emotion I am wiling take the pain to have again and again....Luck in love to you, Tai

[BenightedWhispers]

Aww, how I want to make that pain and heartache go away! Your voice and emotions are so true and pure. Being betrayed hurts worse than anything.

[HorrorMaster]

I like this

[Praiser]

Impressive. prophetic in so many ways

[TPK Stories]

Awesome poem. I could feel the anguish with every word I read. I love all the lines in this poem. Keep up the good work.

[J. R.]

A very honest take on love and loss. Anguish seems to pour from every line.

[KAREN]

Another heart felt write full of pain. loving, but not grtting love in return!!

[deeps]

I've already reviewed this once but didn't listen to vedieo, I like this, It's really good.

[tynamite]

There is pain here in every word. I'm starting to feel sad just reading it.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Very thoughtful and prophetic take on lost love...well done I must say - compelling and the flow is wonderful. Thanks.
Light,
Siddartha