Endangered Species: Heroes

From the pit of flames

Rose swords and spells

Crowns then sprout

Kingdoms were formed

But they demand Heroes

To sing them of glory through songs

Reviews

[aLittlePain]

The title made me smile! Indeed they are in the comic book sense...but for our stories and odes. The simple truth is that heroes are everyday people we just romanticised the idea so much we don't recognise them when they're standing right in front of us. Great piece. R xo

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Rach

Hehe ^^

I do agree with you. I appreciate the comment.

[Sapientiam]

I fell in love with the title. Heroes are definitely an endangered species because people have become so selfish that they only think about their needs. The last line really resonated with me. It reminds me of how legends are born, in a way. Nice job!

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Sapientiam

I`m glad to read that this poem resonated with you.

[christina sherin]

very nice poem.loved reading it.

[Satoshi IroTzu]

Respect, Christina Sherin

I am glad you enjoyed reading it.

[christina sherin]

sure.keep writin.