Thinking of You

Thinking of You

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
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His smiles change my life.... every moment is full of ups and downs

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I keep thinking of you so my head hurts

It feels like my brain is going to burst

I keep thinking of you smiling

Seeing you your smile, I can’t contain my feelings

 

Whenever I see you smile like that

It made me froze on the spot

My mind is building castles in the sky

As my poor heart feels so high

 

Every day I am like this

Every moment with you is a bliss

I keep thinking of you, I have gone crazy

With your smiles, my mind is getting cloudy

 

 

I am like this because of you

I keep thinking of you

 


© 2012 Desmund Tiny



Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
lol...I dedicate this to the person who changed my life....... sarangheyo oppa

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Nice flow of thoughts leading the reader into the turmoil of love. Good to be overtook with love. Make us feel alive and strong. No weakness in the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


This guy has a clever and talented girlfriend !

Posted 5 Years Ago


Desmund Tiny

5 Years Ago

T^T man... I would be very happy if I became his GF but unfortunately not. He only look at me as a l.. read more
This person should feel very honored. Its a great piece.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like this. It's a sweet piece. good write.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on October 1, 2012
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Tags: Smile, Love

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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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