Remember

Remember

A Poem by Desmund Tiny
"

Our love is like living hell and also a paradise

"

You smile and then you shoot me

Coz I always fool around, make this love silly

I smile back and stab you

Coz your coldness makes me feel so blue

 

You always declare worthless fights

And I never step down because of my pride

We throw harsh and mean words to each other

We hurt, we scream, we cry over and over

 

In the middle of our war, I remember

Our love, you as my lover

Soon, fights are done with a passionate kiss

Coz we both know that this our Painful bliss

 

 

 

 

 

 

I shout at you and yell at me

But we’re in love even if we bleed


© 2013 Desmund Tiny



Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
lol it's just a random topic.... ahahhaha I just felt that I am forgotten..... I wonder if someone still remember me... I mean.....aaahhh whatever.... >A<



lol hope you guys like it <3

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Love is like a war. They can both result in happiness, sadness or both. I really like this poem and you will always be remembered, for you exist both in real life and the memories of the people that know of your existence. This poem is very well written.

Good job :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


Desmund Tiny

2 Years Ago

Thank you :)))))
Nightfeather

2 Years Ago

No problem :)
some relationships THRIVE on this type of existence..Very good this...

Posted 4 Years Ago


It clearly states to me what happened in the past :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Painful Bliss...reminds me of my past relation-s***s
It's still an awesome topic

Posted 4 Years Ago


Welcome back - its been a while. You doing ok?

Posted 4 Years Ago


Desmund Tiny

4 Years Ago

yep... I'm doing fine just a bit busy for my midterms exams... ^w^
Love and war. Some people need both in a relationship. I like calm and peace. A very interesting poem. I like the conflict and the strong ending.
"I shout at you and yell at me
But we’re in love even if we bleed"
No weakness in the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on January 29, 2013
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Tags: Love, fight, bitter sweet

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Desmund Tiny
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I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..

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