When you left me

When you left me

A Poem by Desmund Tiny

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The time seem so slow today

As I watch people pass my way

I cruelly pushed you away

With each harsh words that I said


Here missing your kisses and care

Longing for my love to be here

I want to say sorry so sincere

To apologize to all the pain I caused


Now, here I am all alone

Having this day on my own

Regretting that you’re already gone

I’m wishing that you’re still with me

© 2012 Desmund Tiny

Author's Note

Desmund Tiny
just being dramatic

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Ah... this really says "Learn, though never look back" because if you do you will get stuck (in time as it passes so slowly). Very interesting write Des, nice wisdom, and very carefully written, I can see. :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

Sad and well written. I can relate.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Relatable emotions here...
can feel them...

Posted 5 Years Ago

gosh.. i feel you're crying! i feel it.. anyway i like it.. GREAT WRITE

Posted 5 Years Ago

great poem. this is enlivened by the overflowing sentiments.
i can absolutely feel the longing for someone who has already gone.

Posted 5 Years Ago

Not dramatic. Just words expressing the sadness of separation. Easy to take blame and swim in sadness. I like the flow of thoughts and the wish at the end of the poem. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Added on June 4, 2012
Last Updated on June 4, 2012


Desmund Tiny
Desmund Tiny

I just want the name "Desmund Tiny" because it is one of my favorite character in the Novel "Darren Shan" but you can call me Des. ^^, errr.. Hello to my old writings!~ wew it's been years I gues.. more..


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