My Pleasure

Just some rhyming!

I think we should get together
and make this night better

It will be a night of pleasure
that we both will treasure

We will drink some wine
till we are feeling fine

Just give me a sign
I will make you mine

I want to take it slow
exploring your body from head to toe

Just relax and let it all go
I will show you things you didn't know

Watch my gown fall to the floor
Now I will show you what I have in store

First let me shut the door
Because you will be begging for more and more!
THE END!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing movement of words and thoughts. You led the reader to the very nice ending. I'm old school. Slow and easy. Make the good moments last forever. New generation, rushing and too greedy. Thank you Donna for sharing the amazing poetry.

Coyote

[Donna]

Glad you liked it! Thank you for your nice review!

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome Donna.

[catwoman]

i love the rhyming part, and it goes especially with the theme. nice writing

[Donna]

Thank you for the nice review!

[Lyrically Inclined]

You know I love a good rhyme and sexual subject matter!

[.]

Its Sunday and i read the first line knowing this would be my type of poem. Good read

[Donna]

Lol, glad you liked it!

[kelvin]

Sounds like a wild night for him, get em girl hahaha.Anyway nice piece here you have good rhyme going on to. Keep writing

[Donna]

Thank you Kelvin for the review!

[kelvin]

Yes You're welcome and it's good hearing from you

[Just Kim]

wow! so good love the rhyme scheme as well.

[Donna]

Thank you ashes, I appreciate that.

[¿]

Hehe....cute rhyming for beloveds Donna!😊

[Donna]

You are always the first to give me a review my friend, thank you so much Tahsin.

[¿]

It's a kind of milestone for me!😀 you're welcome😊