The Lake

The Lake

A Poem by getinthecarplease

And so the fiery rows of spring gather in the figures glare
To compose the manuscript of the emotions emitted in night
And they did watch the calyx and petals drift along the warming stream
In a dream did they sew the seams of the reflected gleam
And so the flaring rose blows in the gentle breeze of summer air
Which converges at a scarlet horizon with gulls vanishing in the light
And they did observe the words collide in a series of poetic beams
The scheme falls at the rising scream which startles the calm bream
And so the song resides along a riverside 
The lake is shining in the dawn
As dusk chills the burning noon
The pond conducts the autumn spawn
And so the scorched prose shuts its eye in the winter lair
The lauded colors wither into the frigid soul of white
And they did wander to the frozen lake and the slowing stream
In a dream they did seem to drift from the lightened gleam
And so the lovers vanish to the memory of the warming flare
The silvers glow in a convulsing radiance amidst the freezing rite
And they did hold their emotions in a sequence of reams
A theme for the rising steam from the depths of the dream

© 2015 getinthecarplease


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Your work shows you are an intelligent person, this is very professional work. This could have been lyrics to an old Moody Blues song it is so in their style, and I love the Moody Blues. Great depth and imagery, I can see this haunting my thoughts for days as well as "the depths of my dreams". Thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

getinthecarplease

8 Years Ago

I wouldn't say that there work was a direct inspiration but I guess there is some correlation betwee.. read more
getinthecarplease

8 Years Ago

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I did read and I did not understand. Haha
Thanks for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your work shows you are an intelligent person, this is very professional work. This could have been lyrics to an old Moody Blues song it is so in their style, and I love the Moody Blues. Great depth and imagery, I can see this haunting my thoughts for days as well as "the depths of my dreams". Thank you for allowing me the pleasure of reading your work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

getinthecarplease

8 Years Ago

I wouldn't say that there work was a direct inspiration but I guess there is some correlation betwee.. read more
getinthecarplease

8 Years Ago

*their (twice)
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Very nice poem was very interesting and gave a visual image through words. Please check out my book The Frontier

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 23, 2015
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