gentle pain

gentle pain

A Poem by Effector Prime
"

you would

"
You wanted to go so
far away
after leavving me
we did talk for hours
gentle remorse
our haunts are now
just untouched
no more scratching
no more painless biting
to light me up

your heart is my haven

when I was jealous
I was gentle 
when I was possessive
I was not brittle
when I was your soldier
I was responsible

nothing is like how you love me
nothing is like how  you love me

you said you are 
hear to stay I'm smiling
I'm trying to stop the tears
I do look weird
I'm not deranged
yet you still love me

i hate myself when i'm crying
 I cry all alone   (hurts like heaven)
i love myself for you
i would never nearly die again

I just want to be cradled
I'm only a bundle of pain
like the air and some life
light to your petals
Ii would neever nearlt die gain
I love myself for you

© 2016 Effector Prime



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The twisted emotion of love written well in the poetry.
"i hate myself when i'm crying
I cry all alone (hurts like heaven)
i love myself for you
i would never nearly die again"
Love lead us crazy places and things we would do for love. The above realistic and true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

1 Year Ago

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You capture the essence of pain when parting from a loved one under such circumstances. You do need to sort out the spelling and typos though.

Posted 2 Months Ago


There's a lesson I've learnt my dear friend. One must give a lot but not give oneself away completely in love. So that when they go you can reach within and find that piece of you to begin to reconstruct. Next time, try a bit of painful biting!
Superbly written!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

2 Months Ago

Aye true. Lesson learnt haha
DIVYA

2 Months Ago

Lol. I learnt mine too dear friend and t'was a great learning :)
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RSB
Can you expound upon "hurts like heaven"? Interesting concept


Posted 11 Months Ago


Effector Prime

11 Months Ago

pain and precise :(
The twisted emotion of love written well in the poetry.
"i hate myself when i'm crying
I cry all alone (hurts like heaven)
i love myself for you
i would never nearly die again"
Love lead us crazy places and things we would do for love. The above realistic and true. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Effector Prime

1 Year Ago

u think so? s s s s sS i g hhhhhh

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