Hidden Pain

Hidden Pain

A Poem by Wonderland Asylum


When I look at you, many emotions flood over me.

Joy.

Pain.

Security.

Sadness.

Fear.

Heartache.

Love.

I’ve felt these things once before, 

But was ripped away from me.

Almost a year of my life, I had

Thought that I had found the one,

And i thought I was going to live

With this mixture of feelings,

This storm, for this one person.

But it wasn’t what they had wanted.

Everything I felt, didn’t matter

Anymore.  And now, when I

Finally moved on, (or so i thought),

I find myself, ripped away again.

for another person, who had

Stolen a piece of my heavily

Guarded heart.

© 2017 Wonderland Asylum


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I could relate to this because because I just went through something like this and this poem just speaks to me like i love how at the end you ended it with
"I find myself, ripped away again.
for another person, who had
Stolen a piece of my heavily
Guarded heart."
Daamn this is deep.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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It is scary when heart feel hope again. Needing attention and remembering the pain. A hard place to be. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This makes me want to cry. I can totally relate.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could relate to this because because I just went through something like this and this poem just speaks to me like i love how at the end you ended it with
"I find myself, ripped away again.
for another person, who had
Stolen a piece of my heavily
Guarded heart."
Daamn this is deep.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love after love after love...that's it, unwavering. #Capacity#

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I feel you. I can relate to your emotions.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

Crack across the page, and then drips... No matter how heavily we guard things, sometimes... It just is not enough... Emotion sneaks in...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderland Asylum

6 Years Ago

Thank-you so much for welcoming me!
I'm glad to be apart of this group.
Chase Dylan

6 Years Ago

You are most welcome, and glad to have you
(Pure Rhymes group) Honest, personal and emotional poem. “Ripped away”- bleeds on the page, as some relationships do. Stark and staccato. Well- penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderland Asylum

6 Years Ago

Thank-you so much!

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Wonderland Asylum
Wonderland Asylum

Reedley, CA



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Alternative, shy, loves music. I typically keep to myself, and am not very expressive. But when I write, it's like I'm some place else. I've been gone for a while, and I'm working on getting back.. more..

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