‘The Mermaid In Me ‘

Love sets free🌹

The Mermaid In Me:

Oh mercy me
I’m lost at sea
Oh what will
Become
Of
Me -

Oh mercy me

Can’t you see

My hearts floating
Upon
Pure ecstasy

Lost at sea

There’s no lifeboat
For me -

Oh can’t you
Please
Set me
Free-

The pounding
Waves
They rush to
Shore-
But
Oceans wide-

I’m lost in
A back current
Of tide-

Engulfed in marine
Of a heavenly dream-

White horses cap
Each wave of love

Screaming to the
Gulls above

I’m drowning
In each
Undercurrent -

Churning
Burning

Heavens above
The sky so blue -
I wish only
Upon you

Save me
From this sea -
Caress me upon
The shores
Of life-

Removing

All doubt
And strife.

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
3 March 2018

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Kelly... a Mermaid is very Brave to risk her existence with pleas of lost at sea. She is an integral part of dreams and poetry. She has given many a sailor the adventure of love that will give him courage to begin a family. We mortals dream of sleeping in the sea with beautiful voyages under the ocean deep. Your poetry gives us the respite of tranquility. truly, Pat

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

What kind and wonderful words Thankyou so much for your time, I do appreciate it - oh to be free like the sea- 🌹

[MsJewel]

I love anything to do with the ocean. Your metaphors are lovely. Well done :)Julie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou dearest Julie I’m glad it made your heart happy- I love the ocean- Thankyou for taking time 🌹

[Ghost]

This was an intimate poem of dreams, hopes, love... Beautiful poem

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou I appreciate your time🌹