‘Bubbles’

Gasps of tenderness put out on the wind🌹

'Bubbles'

Bursting
Bubbles of
Fragrance-
Turning your
Emotions
Upside
Down-
Trading
A frown
For a
Crown-
Happiness
All
Around-
All this
Found in
A scent
Bringing
Fragrance
To life-

The flower
Of the fields,
Awakening
How
We feel-
Making it
All real-

Birds flying-
Crying out
Above-
Telling the
World
Of
The love
That
Can be found,
All
Around-

The breeze
In the
Trees-
Swaying-
Hypnotising
You
And me-
Setting you
Free from
What you
Can't see-

Bursting
Colours-
Re-igniting
Lovers-
Lost in
The
Aroma
Of the
Bubbles,
Bursting
All around-
Is this
Heaven
We've
Found?

Kelly Fagelund Gjersoe
7 April 2017

Reviews

[Doodley]

I always associated bubbles with the joys of childhood and the smiles they would bring. Here, you have attributed them to the joy and the beauty of nature that exists around us. Something that also brings a smile to the face. And the way some people become joyous on the bubbles they drink, it seems that 'Bubbles' are the perfect metaphor for happiness!

I enjoyed the piece. Swift and well written, as always.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou and I’m glad it makes you smile and the joy of a child deep inside each one of us we need to connect with that- I appreciate your time🌹

[barleygirl]

This sounds like a snappy rhythmic tune full of imaginative wordplay, such as rhyming & alliteration. I love the way you use lots of unusual & dynamic verbs that make your message come alive. I love the way you blend the various aspects of nature with phenomenon such as "bubbles" and "flowers" and "fragrance" and "breezes" and many more words that convey the sense of a dancing party full of nature aspects. Overall, this is how it feels to me, living near the wilderness but never alone with so much action going on out there! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

And I love your review- Thankyou kindly🌹So glad it entertained your senses🌹

[Mari' Emeraude]

What a beautiful and breezy poem. It reminds me of the coming season, when all the flowers are new and their fragrance is all around. Lovely

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou what nice words- thanku for your time🌹

[DIVYA]

Bubbles are symbolic of such positivity. The poem fills the reader with joy. To associate them with love. So creative and uplifting!

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou for your kind words🌹

[McEltic]

Bubbles seem to have mood changing effect on people... even cats and dogs forget their quarrels for a chance to catch bubbles... :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Yes it’s true- Thankyou for you visit🌹

[lightsong]

Some things are wondrous in a most gentle way, lift us so high, so free, our emotions fly and fly... those lovely tender bubbles, hold in each a scent, a vision, a word, a sigh, a tiny piece of anything that is beautiful... a little beauty of our world... how sweetly pure are Your bubbles...

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou again for your wonderful kind words- yes they create an aura of escape and freedom but full in gentleness and care🌹

[Kay]

I feel this way around bubbles too: "Turning your Emotions Upside Down-/ Trading A frown For a Crown". It's a nice line. =)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Thankyou we need to turn the frown around-🌹