Kingdom of Thetie
A Book by Faith2993
 "Not all of us are destined to be heroes and that's okay... Sometimes our destiny is to help others accomplish theirs." The Oniziara said to the Volker.  © 2016 Faith2993
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Any critique is welcomed :) Thank you for reading!
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I loved the opening. It was interesting as well as eerie at some bits. I enjoyed the flow of writing till the conversation began, where i felt suddenly the pace slowed down a bit. But I think you made a deliberate slow down in order to take the story forward. Waiting to read more....good luck
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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7 Years Ago
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my story :) It means a lot to me
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7 Years Ago
You are most welcome. We writers are all here to support each other...
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I loved the opening. It was interesting as well as eerie at some bits. I enjoyed the flow of writing till the conversation began, where i felt suddenly the pace slowed down a bit. But I think you made a deliberate slow down in order to take the story forward. Waiting to read more....good luck
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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7 Years Ago
Thanks for taking the time to read and review my story :) It means a lot to me
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7 Years Ago
You are most welcome. We writers are all here to support each other...
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