Forest of dreams

Trees made of glass

Grass a sapphire blue

The moon a vibrant yellow

Butterfly’s ablaze with fire

The moon turned blood red

A scythe to my head

The ground now a beautiful violet 

Reviews

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Trees made of glass
ME: OOOOH HOW PWETTY!!!!

Grass a sapphire blue
ME: WHERE?????

The moon a vibrant yellow
ME: I guess its a little yellow, here...waaaah it sounds so beautiful!!!!!!

Butterfly’s ablaze with fire
ME: I LOVE BUTTERFLIES!!!!!!! *attempts to fly off chair* No....

The moon turned blood red
ME: *gasps madly* O.O A TWIST????

A scythe to my head
ME: That's not my scyhte is it?? *turns around to see shiny scythe still behind me* WHO THE FUDGE IS THAT??????

The ground now a beautiful violet
ME: O.O.....THAT WAS CREEPY COOL!!!!! WOOT WOOT! AWESOME MAN!!!!!! :3

[Rika]

Rolf!

[Love Demon]

Beautiful, just beautiful ^_^

[Dominique]

That is werid, it thought i posted. Well oh well. Now this is a wonderful poem and I like how you make it your own. It is defanately short and to the point which is wonderful. Also, I like how you describe the forest. Great job.

[Tomislav Petricevic]

I love it how you managed to portray so many images in such a short poem. The ending was rather unexpected, but I like twists and turns, so it's pretty awesome.
Good job.

[VelvetRosetta]

Lovely how you brought these images to life, writing isnt always meant to be black and white adding ones true view on how we see things is what makes writing an truly wonderful thing. Nice Piece!

[Freedom's Child]

Great imagery, it has beautiful and dark connotations all in the same lines. Nice work

[Irvette Dauphine]

this is short poem, but this is was amazing :D
"Trees made of glass Grass a sapphire blue" really like it :)

[deepblue04]

I really ddnt expect death to be apart of a forest of dreams. very interesting though! Maybe a better title could help the poem

[Akhand Pratap Singh]

worked on my imagination, it was brilliantly done..
The moon turned blood red

A scythe to my head

The ground now a beautiful violet
amazing lines

[RachelReaper]

This is a short poem, but full of imagery and paints a really pretty picture (though I'm sorry you were figuratively executed...) in my head. The lines, "Trees made of Glass." and "Butterfly's ablaze with fire" especially stuck out to me. Great job :)

[Weeping Willow]

Nice, weird but nice