Blank Canvas

Blank Canvas

A Poem by Giullia King
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A soul that's out of this world

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I could admire you forever. 
You're like a blank canvas, desperate to find some colors in the world that might light up your life. 
But there's not even a color that could describe your depth. 
Your soul is out of this world, an endless imagination that can't be trapped in this monotonous and grey world.

© 2017 Giullia King



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You execute "fully" - pouring until the last drop has dripped. This makes reading your work quite fulfilling; satisfying to read. For a shorter piece - this is perfect. A job well done. You seem to have a fine eye.

I like the title as well. I have a piece with the same title.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Giullia King

1 Year Ago

I have to read your piece! Thank you so much P



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your prose reminds me of a superior spiritual being on Earth and struggling to find some goodness that is redeeming ..not finding any life is anguish for such a being ... but i am also reminded of the power of our mind and eternal soul ... only inhibited by our selves .. i saw a comment you made on one of Valentines poems and thought your avatar was intriguing so i am visiting .. tho we do not know each other ;} hope that ok!
E.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Gullia King,
A good note you left here; very helpful. I could admire you forever; that is saying a lot. Being a blank slate is an interesting state to be in but you have given it a really creative edge. Colors in the world ..light up you life; the filling and brightening. Not even a color ...describe depth. So much more to explain! This is a poem where I am watching the artist creating. It is amazing to see you bring it about in words! Very cool! Blessings Kathy

Posted 9 Months Ago


I think each of us sees the one we love as a blank canvas who we ourselves want to paint..finding joy in the thought that the colours we paint them with are ours to keep and ultimately them..
This is a good piece! I can derive so many meanings from it! Loved reading this!☺

Posted 11 Months Ago


Giullia King

11 Months Ago

I appreciate your review on my piece, Yumna! Thank you so much :)
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

You are always welcome, Gullia
so astral in depth and romantic in thought, I like how the poem states exactly what the poet is thinking, the meaning to me, describes classic, innocent, starry admiration, lovely work here.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Giullia King

11 Months Ago

Sorry for the delay, Michael. Thank you for your lovely review on this one. I'm happy you understand.. read more
Short and sweet. Purposefully fulfilled.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you!
I feel drawn to the idea of the blank canvas that cries out for colour. How wonderful to be described as one with an imagination that 'can't be trapped i this monotonous and grey world'.

I love to connect with those who have vivid imaginations and, for me, the world of poetry is a world of the imagination. All things are possible within it, and when two imaginations meet and fuse, it is like the pleasure of love-making, taking each onto a heavenly plane of emotion and vibrant experience.

Lovely piece of writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! It really means a lot to me :)
must consider this poetry one of my fav. not 'cause it's written by "Gullia" but it's well flourished by the innocence of your thoughts. romance. love. faith... and priorities of desperate hearts'.. everything have you swiftly licked deep down in squirted words. choice of words's so mesmerizing as well. liked the given line:

"You're like a blank canvas,
desperate to find some colors in the world that might light up your life... "

such a perfect glamour of god's own creation have you filtered here in such textures of... "canvas'. nicely done. perfectly inked!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!
Amazing use of words. You create a interesting canvas for the reader. I enjoyed this poem. Thank you Gullia for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading! Much appreciated :)
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
You execute "fully" - pouring until the last drop has dripped. This makes reading your work quite fulfilling; satisfying to read. For a shorter piece - this is perfect. A job well done. You seem to have a fine eye.

I like the title as well. I have a piece with the same title.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Giullia King

1 Year Ago

I have to read your piece! Thank you so much P
This is truly stunning. The canvas idea is perfect for this

Posted 1 Year Ago


Giullia King

1 Year Ago

The canvas idea is a bit different but perfect :) Thank you!

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