Kissing You Is...

Kissing You Is...

A Poem by H. A. M.
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Touching lips is a rareity with me. Some disregard it and dismiss it. I like it like sex and it's a lovers hand shake. nuf said.

"

Kissing you is…

Oral.

 

Kissing you …

 

is relaxing

to me.

 

Kissing you is…

misunderstood

by most

 

…and sexy.

 

Kissing you is…

how we talk

to each other

in the morning light.

 

It says I love you

 

more than last night.

 

 

More than pressing lips

and savoring your intentions

that taste sweet.

 

I’m

Imprisoned in

your grasp

 

with our

lips locked

in love

yet

still I

feel free.

 

It’s the one time

in a passionate way

I get to connect

with divinity.

 

Like the feeling

when connected souls

connect.

 

You’re suppose to

be on my lips.

 

Still…

 

kissing you is…..

the fun part of my day

 

Like those

stolen kisses

between classes.

 

They taste  

the best.

 

They’re fast.

They’re quick.

They’re promising.

 

Sometimes…

 

I get to feel

some breast.

 

…and I digress

 

 

Kissing leads to other

things

that I won’t mention.

 

Like your tongue

In my mouth.

 

I wish I was your favorite song..

so I could be

on your lips

in your mouth

on your tongue

and on your mind

all the day long.

 

“I’m so into you”

 

Kissing is….

too cool

fine

and erotic…

and not enough anymore.

 

Damn gurl …

Your s**t is intoxicating!

....and I’m so hungry for you now.

 

..feed me…

 

 

 


© 2008 H. A. M.



Author's Note

H. A. M.
The lovey dovey. Kissing is so cool!

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i like this one, i forget how good kisses can be, it centered to me. oddly calming but the flow and beat keep steady. inspiration is good to you it seems,
I wish I was your favorite song..
so I could be
on your lips
in your mouth
on your tongue
and on your mind
all the day long.
this is my favorite part, i adore your imagery. a terrific piece ham-kun.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yeah, kissing is quite amazing. With the right person, that certain embrace could make you feel so blissful that problems at that moment, are just illusions.

Anyways, when it comes to your poem, it's very sensual and well written. I enjoyed the flow, and the emotion in this piece.

Thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lol..that ending is great!!
aaaaaaawwwwwww this is sweet
i like how you've taken kissing
and turned it into this memorable thing
i like kissing eventhough i only kiss my nieces and nephews
and not in a dirty way
but it makes me feel good to know that
their not to embarressed to give the old aunt a peck on the check
every once and a while...lol

Memories!!! hahaha

~~Theta

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you did good
kissing is sooooo much better then what happened "last night" in your words
*smile*

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is ah!-mazing! haha

so basically i gather that you love kissing! haha but i really enjoy how you show all the different aspects of kissing and not just the sexual nature of it. you show how kissing can brighten the day and hold your focus. you show how it can be simple and sweet or sensual and passionate. and i like the artistic value of it. the breaks and choppy read make it seem as though maybe you were losing your breath or you couldn concentrate because the kisses were messing up your thoughts. the whole scatterbrained appeal is wonderful && i agree kissing is cool! :) great work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i like this one, i forget how good kisses can be, it centered to me. oddly calming but the flow and beat keep steady. inspiration is good to you it seems,
I wish I was your favorite song..
so I could be
on your lips
in your mouth
on your tongue
and on your mind
all the day long.
this is my favorite part, i adore your imagery. a terrific piece ham-kun.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yes Ham, kissing is the best! and the most telling test! Great start to my Tuesday, and hopefully a kiss for you every day. Smiling at your romantic heart, Tai

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the way you celebrate an act like kissing, showing that an act as simple as two people pressing their lips together can be much more complex than it appears. I also like the way that you can be sensual without being overly sexual; most people either can't or don't separate the two. Some people don't know the difference.

I do have a few suggestions, however.

More than pressing lips
and savoring your intentions
that taste sweet.

I would switch this:
More than pressing lips
and savoring your sweet intentions.

It's less confusing.

"Suppose" should be "supposed." Also, it should be "If I were..." rather than "If I was..."

I would also cut down on the ellipses. I know it's hard. I tend to overdo them sometimes too.

Try to condense a little because the breaks are a little confusing and distracting. I think it would flow much more smoothly if there weren't so many breaks between the lines. Group like thoughts together. Also, some lines can be combined. This would make it much more easier to read and also would help you to more clearly present your message.

Overall, you've got a good piece here. Thanks for sharing. I hope I've helped.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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