Will You Dance With Me?

 

 

 

 

Will You Dance With Me?

 

Will you waltz with me in moist midnight air...

Take my hand to the strains of violins' 

Without a care?

Our newly discovered fragrant rose garden of Secret delights...

Kissed by moon's bright shining light

Enchanted by the calling of deep 

Mystical sounds

At last I've found

Look deep into my eyes as you embrace

my waist so tight...

On a magical carpet ride

This enchanting night

When our dance is through, my dear

Our hearts entwined together its clear....

As we sit at the feet of Eros' enthralling shrine

Our love will out-dazzle the brightest star's shine ~

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem dear Poet. The dance bring two people together create perfect movement.
"When our dance is through my dear
Our hearts will be entwined together its clear"
I agree with the above lines. Dance allow two people to find a understanding for a moment. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Helena]

Hello beautiful friend. I have sure missed everyone here after a very long time away. Thank you so much for your kind review of this poem. I am so glad you liked it :)

Helena :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy dear Helena and you are welcome.

[Lydia Shutter]

I especially enjoyed the mention of "Eros" in this glorious love poem. I know you posted this over a year ago, Helena, but I hope you still see reviews. This poem sways down the page....I could see them dancing. So very romantic. Lydi**

[Helena]

Dear Lydia,

Thank you so much for your lovely review.

I have been absent from here too long, bu somehow life always seems to throw 'curve balls' with one thing and another.

Kind regards,
Helena

[Rick Puetter]

Soft and tender, Helena. Floating of the moist midnight breeze.

Enjoyed.

Best regards,

Rick

[Helena]

I am truly glad you like it dear Poet. Thank you so much!

Kind regards,

read moreI am truly glad you like it dear Poet. Thank you so much!

Kind regards,

Helena :)

[Skib]

Hey Helena

I felt your passion and connection, the way you portrayed it was tantalizing and intense :) really good imagery and wording :) well done

thank you

kind regards

Skib(Gary)

[Helena]

You are too kind Gary! Thank you I appreciate your lovely review.

Helena

[Ehra Khan]

Hello! This poem is pure delight. With the colorful imagery and simple honest emotions. Loved it! :)

[Helena]

Thank you so much Inaya, I am thrilled that you liked it!

[Norman 223]

No analysis needed. Just sheer enjoyment and literary musicality.
PS. Where do you get your amazing illustrations for all your poems?

Norman

[Helena]

Hi Norman, now don't faint! I know it's been a year since I posted this! Just getting back into the swing of things here after a very long absence with 'life matters'. So pleased to be back and catching up on my "old" friends lol (no pun intended ;)

[Richard🖌]

Uh, sure, if you don't mind my clumsy feet stepping on your toes … only teasing. : )

Ohhh, Helena!
Even if I'd never danced, after reading through all the alluring nuances of this enthralling piece you'd have a time getting me off your card, the imagery of all you said so sweetly stirred the hidden dreams of floating through your garden of secret delights like Fred Astaire, with you in my arms.
See what a lovely effect you have on my vivid imagination … LOL!
Such an entreating, befitting picture to express the essence of your wondrously-writ verses of enchantment, and after the dance … oh-MY! The roses beneath are a lovely touch, too, and the hot pink … MMmmm!

I'd like to single-out at least one verse, line, or word, but alas, it seems nothing can do without all the rest, it all fits so perfectly, and the rhymes and flow create a rhythm ever-so sensually sublime, in slowww, gentle waltz-time.

Thank you, Helena, for the sooo romantic invitation … now, to brush-up on my steps to please the Lady*
I love it! ⁓ Richard

[Helena]

Oh Richard, what have I missed not being here! I am slowly catching up with all my dear friends and feel quite teary. It's so wonderful being back 'home' at the Café. Your delicious review makes it all worthwhile. I had kinda thought my Muse had disappeared into the blue.....but hopefully she came back, stronger than ever.

How's the Dancing practice going? Your wonderful review read like a poem. Beautifully written dear poet! I appreciate your words.

Helena

[Richard🖌]

I bet I'd not step on your lovely toes, now … LOL! ; )

[Helena]

hahaha.....you are coming along quite nicely, especially with the Cha Cha Cha! Now brush up on the tango! lol

[Onyia-Ali, Kingsley Chu..]

A very good captivating poem. I love how the content flows. The last two line - very powerful on what love can do when is true.

[Helena]

Thank you so much for your very kind review.

Kindest regards,
Helena

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love this...but then i love dancing...and sometime i think between two people it is really most sensual form of expression imaginable...moving together, moving to the beat...having the music in us, as one.

[Helena]

Very eloquently reviewed......absolutely I so agree with you dear friend!

Cheers,
read moreVery eloquently reviewed......absolutely I so agree with you dear friend!

Cheers,

Helena

[Abderrahmane Dakir]

Romantic love by dance, It give us a joy. Thank you to sharing this wonderful poem.

[Helena]

Oh thank you so much Sir. You are very kind to take the time to read and leave your appreciated review.

Helena