I am....

I am....

A Poem by Gee
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A constant

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I am night and day,
the sun and moon,
the ebbing, flowing tides.
I am the changing seasons,
reliable, predictable, dependable.
I am a smile for a sad face,
a dry shoulder for tears,
strong arms and a soft, kind heart.
I am proud, devoted, loyal,
loving..........irreplaceable.
I am eternally grateful,
grateful that I am her father.


© 2018 Gee



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Gee
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Well written - always hard to express the parental role - just so vast to cover but you have done it succinctly

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Thank you. No words could do justice to the depth of my love for her.
Pity you aren't in the brownies Gee, the points you'd get for this would be enough to retire on. Smooth.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

S**t, missed off the wishful thinking...
Lorry forty-ten.

11 Months Ago

Ha, still laughing at the budgie smugglers...but then I don't have to see it :)
Gee

11 Months Ago

Must be a poem somewhere in my vacuous mind
This is a superb piece, and a very enjoyable read. Beautifully written. Keep up the fine work!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Thank you SJM
SJ Mullins

11 Months Ago

You are most welcome. :)
Oh Goodness.
This left me Jawstruck.
Beautiful 💕
'I am eternally grateful,
I am her father. '
😍
I Loved each and every word of it.
Keep Writing 💕❤
It's beautiful.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Thank you Rashi. My daughter is a beautiful young lady inside and out
Rashi Jain

11 Months Ago

She is lucky and so are you.
God bless you both😀😉
Gee

11 Months Ago

Thank you..
You make fatherhood a proud undertaking. Great write, Gee.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Thank you..
I think every father should be that amazing..and it makes me want to give someone a hug :) like for real..lol definitely nice!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Thank you Dawn
Blithely reliant

Excellent Read

Matthew

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Cheers Matthew
You can't think better than that.
Always there to say well done, or he's not the one.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Paul Bell

11 Months Ago

She'll do fine. The world is still a great place to grow.
Gee

11 Months Ago

I'll be at her side with a shotgun
Paul Bell

11 Months Ago

That works too.
fathers are always in the shadows, you brought them to life. nice work gee

Posted 11 Months Ago


Gee

11 Months Ago

Cheers Andrew
andrew mitchell

11 Months Ago

you are welcome.
I can see you gazing at her in this Gee - without making it too obvious to her - as she studies - filled with pride, worry, tears up-welling and heart swelling.
Brought a lump to my throat.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Tony Jordan

11 Months Ago

for some feelings there are no words...
Gee

11 Months Ago

Ahhhh, there you go, nail on the head my sagacious friend, nail on the friggin head. Have a good day.. read more
Tony Jordan

11 Months Ago

Ditto Gee son.

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Added on June 29, 2017
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