Valentine

Valentine

A Poem by Gee
"

What more to wish than to be loved

"
When my husk dries and bones yellow
a lichen covered stone will proclaim,
to those that stop to read,
that the man who was and is no more
was a father, husband, son, brother, uncle.
But more, so much more, he was loved...


© 2024 Gee


Author's Note

Gee
Every day our love should be expressed not once every 365!

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A lovely tribute to your father on Valentine's Day....seems like he was
renaissance man....and that he loved his family as much a you loved him....
Warmly, B

Posted 4 Days Ago


You got that right. Fantastic work.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Gee! I just deleted whatever that was I was trying to say...blush.

Posted 1 Week Ago


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This is perfect and says it all in well chosen words.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Succinct, to the point, makes sense and a hint more of us should follow.
Come to think of it, maybe i should forego the last bit of me saying it, which goes a little like this. "i love you..... Almost as much as cheesecake!" 😊
Hope you and yours are well Gee.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Gee

1 Week Ago

Thanks Lorry.
Hope you are well and the rain Gods north of the border are not constantly piss.. read more
Lorry

1 Week Ago

Been dry(ish) today, but at least its not as bad as it has been, well until the next weather alert w.. read more
Gee

1 Week Ago

Yeahhhhhh, more rain:)
Gee!
Love the concept!
If I may? I think the tense should be "future"... "When my husk dries and bones yellow"...
and Things are "that," people are "who," "those who" and "the man who..."

Posted 1 Week Ago


Gee

1 Week Ago

Thanks Vol, all assistance welcomed.
Hope you are well
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Gee

1 Week Ago

😎...........

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Added on February 11, 2024
Last Updated on February 12, 2024
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Gee
Gee

Milton keynes, United Kingdom



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Devoted family man and lover of life. Simply written, easily understood "stuff" for those without code breaking skills. You will NEVER need Google to understand me:) more..

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