Quills

Quills

A Poem by Jenna

Whisper to me sonnets about nostalgia and desire.
Rhyme each line with iambic fire.

Tease my skin with a feathered quill leaving traces of ink.
Pen words of passion, etching deeper as we sink.

© 2013 Jenna


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Well, Jenna,
I've penned plenty of those kind of Sonnets.
"Quills" is a catchy title, an apt one to draw poetesses and poets onto your page and into your moment.
I think your lines are composed in excellent syntax, appealing and captivating imagery, with a smooth flow and simple, spot-on rhymes … I felt the nuances of warmth and soft sensuality, too.
A succinct but unhurried, well-struck, and skillfully rendered piece.

I thoroughly enjoyed this, enough to return and read several times before reviewing it for you.
Thank you most gratefully for the pleasure, Jenna ⁓ Richard : )

BTW:
Your "Don't Be Ashamed of Your Passions" (and much more) was very well put.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Nicely done Jenna, the last line is killer...

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 8, 2013
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Jenna
Jenna

Pensacola, FL



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