You and me

You and me

A Poem by Intothemilkyway
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This is a complete different poem from my previous one. It does not have any connection to " You and I"

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Heal or break 
Fight or surrender 
Alive or dead
Which is it?

Tell me
"Did you love me ?"
Or "Did you hate me?" 
I don't know is what you said

I left you and you left me
We left behind lots of good memories 
We left behind a beating heart which was dead
We had no communication or whatsoever 

You said what you said 
And i said what i said
Everything ended with a goodbye.





© 2018 Intothemilkyway



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No time for sadness, huh? You give us a treat here, a mini-treatise on superficiality and inhumanity -- so much everywhere these days. Simple imagery for a meaty topic. Still, you shun the melancholy and keep your guard up with enough rhyme to keep it lively. Good job.

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Very to the point and showed true feelings, like the way you can feel the situation.

Posted 5 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No time for sadness, huh? You give us a treat here, a mini-treatise on superficiality and inhumanity -- so much everywhere these days. Simple imagery for a meaty topic. Still, you shun the melancholy and keep your guard up with enough rhyme to keep it lively. Good job.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Intothemilkyway
Intothemilkyway

Albania



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