Completion

Completion

A Poem by J. Hampton

a bent,rusted snow shovel leans against the building

an effigy to winter

 

forsythia buds peek warily out at the overcast early Spring morning with

the yellow giggle of children

 

ravens sit in rigid rows across the top of the tomb

doves gracefully hover and flutter above

disregarding the dark harbingers below

 

awaiting the broken seal

for the Son to roll away the stone

and the Sun... will of course choreograph a symphony

when

"IT IS FINISHED"


© 2016 J. Hampton



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I like the message behind this...love our Lord. The piece might benefit from an edit and proofread though. I'm sure you'll find the points in question. Good to see you here and hope your Easter Sunday is bountifully blessed by our living Lord. Peace, love and light.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. Hampton

1 Year Ago

good to be here ...missed the WC...you especially Fabian
a horrible draft I know but ...a wo.. read more



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Gee
I enjoyed the read, admire your faith but as a non believer struggle badly with the whole Jesus, God story.
Good morning

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J. Hampton

1 Week Ago

I appreciate the read
never struggle with what someone else believes...
and never bad.. read more
A magnificent depiction of an even more magnificent event.
Gratifying read, J.

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J. Hampton

1 Week Ago

thanks for reading
magnificent event beyond anything
A beautiful, poignant interpretation of the ‘final words’ for the redemption of humankind. Great write ….

Posted 8 Months Ago


A great reminder of The Greatest Story Ever Told! Great work.

Posted 9 Months Ago


I really admire how you use your words! I can tell you're a writer!

Posted 1 Year Ago


The heart-heard promise of Easter...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. Hampton

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reading ...but most of all for understanding
Chris

1 Year Ago

sometimes we can DO understanding - when there is nothing at all else...
I like the message behind this...love our Lord. The piece might benefit from an edit and proofread though. I'm sure you'll find the points in question. Good to see you here and hope your Easter Sunday is bountifully blessed by our living Lord. Peace, love and light.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

J. Hampton

1 Year Ago

good to be here ...missed the WC...you especially Fabian
a horrible draft I know but ...a wo.. read more

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Added on March 26, 2016
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