Suffer In Silence

I’m trapped, alone in a dark place I do not call home,

Mind boggled, thoughts jumbled; my thoughts drop, thought process crumbled.

How did I get here, will I ever know?

Confusion rushing closer, body shutting down now more slow.

Rage inside me building like an agile mind,

Losing control, thriving for nothing, like a species of some kind.

Why this is happening, do I dare ask?

No? Or is this a mere reflection of my past.

I’m slipping away from myself quickly,

Physically seen but suffering silently.

I’m standing alone, everything spinning around me,

Dropping o my knees; I testify to not be set free.

Cuffing my hands in my face, thinking “Ughh..Such violence”;

Suddenly awake, I’m trapped, alone in a dark place I do not call home, as I suffer in silence.

Author's Note

This is my favorite one..be nice....

Reviews

[Babe Roxx]

I feels like a nightmare I had...one of those strange dreams you awake from and it feels lucid and your remember it somewhat..then I don't remember a thing at all after an hour or so...just a feeling that I felt scared in that dream...this write captured that feeling I had, which makes your writing superb...its raw, and I bet, in time, you will age like fine wine...hey, that rhymed..I'm a poet, and I didn't even know it...okay, sorry, that was cheesy. lol

[Shardbearer99]

I love this line "Losing control, thriving for nothing, like a species of some kind" - when I have nightmares, which seem to be rather frequently, they're about how I cope when my gran passes. I become so lost with rage, that all I care about is nothing. There was a really dark atmosphere to this poem that gave you a really good understanding of what it must have been like for the individual involved. You're very good at expressing yourself with words and the sentences flow fluently. Well done. Thoroughly enjoyed it

[TheFemininePad]

A good poem. You need to fix the line that says, "Dropping o my knees" to "Dropping on my knees. Luckily I never had this as a nightmare. I would absolutely hate having a nightmare like this. You did a good job in conveying your emotions in this poem.

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

This doesn't remind me of a nightmare I had, It reminds me of my past........ I am not sure how to respond..... Its a great poem though really intence

[Rose Masen]

@ Everett- Your words just gave me an instant adrenaline rush and a sense of beauty. Thank you, so very much.