under my son's bed   A Senryu

under my son's bed A Senryu

A Poem by Joyce S. Greene
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you never know what you might find under your son's bed . . .

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© 2013 Joyce S. Greene



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Joyce S. Greene
Publication credit: Prune Juice 2010

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This makes me afraid to have children :) I'd rather find a monster under there! Great job!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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This is so funny. I was thinking of a monster under the bed. One of a different sort, I suppose.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

4 Years Ago

Thanks, Brianna. I really appreciate your comment. It means a lot to me.
Hah, the typical coming of age and no mother is ever really ready to face it. Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

4 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by to leave your very kind thoughts I appreciate your encouraging words very .. read more
Oh my...I JUST LOGGED OUT AND SAW THIS. So I had to log back in to leave a review. Freakin hilarious! 100/100

Posted 4 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Muse. You're very gracious and I appreciate your words more than you can know.
I don't have a son, but now I'm almost afraid to look under my daughter's bed....

Your poem is cute and clever Joyce. Love it

Hugs, Julie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

4 Years Ago

Thanks, Julie. I appreciate your very kind words. Hope your daughter grows up to be a fine poetess.. read more
MsJewel

4 Years Ago

Actually Joyce - she is a newspaper reporter. She just graduated from college and works for the Los .. read more
Joyce S. Greene

4 Years Ago

That's too bad, Julie, but at least she inherited your love for the written word. Hope your day is .. read more
eternal Momma viewpoint. Thank god you didn't bring school bag :P :P

Posted 4 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

4 Years Ago

You've got me thinking, even about your comment, Anand. Thanks for leaving your thoughts behind, yo.. read more
Funny Joyce. The things you can find under the kids bed if you are brave enough to look. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

4 Years Ago

Hi Jack. Thanks for leaving your thoughts behind. My son was a good kid so I didn't have to worry .. read more
Brilliant. It made me chuckle. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

4 Years Ago

Thank you for letting me know your thoughts, Lola. It means a lot to me.
Sounds like a normal boy to me

Posted 4 Years Ago


Joyce S. Greene

4 Years Ago

Thanks, BR, I appreciate your stopping by to leave your thoughts.

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Added on September 8, 2013
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