Lovers

Lovers

A Poem by JanieB
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Menke.. 1 to 13 syllables in 13 lines

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LOVERS

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

HELLO

MY FRIEND

HOW ARE YOU?

YOU’RE MY LOVER

YOU’RE MY EVERTHING

I ADORE YOU SO MUCH

YOU MAKE MY LIFE SO COMPLETE

DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU?

I WANT TO BE WITH YOU FOREVER

NOW YOU’RE HERE IN MY LIFE, PLEASE STAY WITH ME

LET’S HOLD EACH OTHER SO CLOSE, AND KISS ALL NIGHT

MY DARLING, MY HEAD IS SPINNING SO FAST IT HURTS

I’M ON BENDED KNEE, PLEASE WILL YOU MARRY ME BABES?

 

© 2011 JanieB


Author's Note

JanieB
"Menke"..one to thirteen syllables, in thirteen lines.
Bit of a challenge..

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This is such a cute little poem! Great job

Posted 8 Years Ago


You did well, though the term babes at the end kind of destroyed the feel of the poem for me, still thats just me, well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is great! I love experimenting with different forms.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Awesome work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


So romantic! Beautiful!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


great! very romantic

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was fun to read. Good job! I love increasingly long lines. :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cooleio

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting love :)
Beautiful dedication :)
xx

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting style of writing...I like it...:)
Peace
Robin

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on November 20, 2010
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JanieB
JanieB

Paphos, Europe, Cyprus



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I started writing in October '10. A real new bee to this world of writing. I currently live in Cyprus, where I have been since 2005. I am British, and have spent many years living abroad. Please j.. more..

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