What does it mean to you...

What does it mean to you...

A Poem by JayDee

What does it mean to you
when i say something that was of the past

What does it mean to you
when you actually remember why we were

What will it ever mean to you
If i told you that I have not forgotten

Will it ever mean anything to you...
If i told you that i still care...

© 2017 JayDee



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Sometimes the mere simplicity of love is never unraveled. I hope you find the answers you are looking for - I believe you will!

Posted 8 Months Ago


JayDee

8 Months Ago

This is true.
I have... wasn't very pleasing to hear, but nevertheless, i did get what i nee.. read more
Kelly Scheppers

8 Months Ago

...good for you!! ...my pleasure!
"What will it ever mean to you
If i told you that I have not forgotten"
That's what I feel..
I liked the repetition in your poem which adds to the beauty of the emotions expressed.. Nicely penned :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Of course! I don't give false hopes ;)
You're welcome, JayDee :)
JayDee

8 Months Ago

Haha its always good to know that you're not alone
Thanks again
Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Welcome, pleasure was mine ☺
very beautiful write. really like the last two lines.

Posted 8 Months Ago


JayDee

8 Months Ago

Thanks K.
Much appreciated
This is beautifully lyrical JayDee.
I could have read couplets like this all day long.
:)

Posted 9 Months Ago


JayDee

9 Months Ago

Aw, thank you Tony. Much appreciated :)

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JayDee
JayDee

Johannesburg, South Africa



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