I AM

All my writing is abstract, so don't expect a perfect farytale poem where everything rhymes!

 

I Define writing, I am literature,

every hand that holds a pen, reeps my signature.

If fitted together with delicacy and passion,

by a hand so skillful, withering and weaving my words,

To create an emotion, in the reaction.

Hearts have shone, tears have fallen,

rage and fury my words have called.

I am the ink that writes the letters,

found in the words, tangled in the phrases.

I am the phrases found in the lines,

and the lines bound together so that all rhymes.

Not everyone knows, and not everyone shall,

that if i leave now, this world will be dull.

Forever there was and forever will be,

a majestic hand, that reeps all in me.

I am the letter that lovers write,

I am the war every country fights.

I am the joy that life has to offer,

I am the comfort a widdow longs after.

I am the book every novelist ever wrote,

I am the critic every reader has to quote.

As long as a hand... holds a pen,

I am the poem that shall reep from them.

                                       Josua Blom

Author's Note

It's a poem on poems, if you didn't catch it yet.

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

This so does not match your profile introduction. Of course you can write poetry!! This has a flawless movement. It carries the reader right through. Excellent work!

[Kenya J]

If poems could talk I think it would say these words. Good job!!!!! Very Creative

[Lexi Nicole]

Amazing! I love this piece, it's so lively and very true. Great work!

-Howl

[Annique le Roux]

absolutely brilliant! the way you wrote this is so clever and well thought out...this really is very good!
just two things i picked up: 'reep' should be spelt 'reap' ....and in line 4, check the use of the word 'withering', i dont think it fits into the meaning of the rest of the line.....besides that, i really really enjoyed reading this...you really managed to put across your love for poetry

my favourite: "As long as a hand... holds a pen,

I am the poem that shall reep from them"

this is such a good ending, it managed to put across the main idea spoken about in the poem and gives the reader closure....well done, this really is a brilliant piece of work...

[~IlOvEcHrIsToPhErBuRnEt..]

yeah i caught it, holy crap i really like this one. Not only is it the words you use but you use a variety of them so it isnt the same words over and over like mine. but its also the creativity, must have a really big imagination to come up with something like this, i enjoy reading your poems because its like i can picture exactly whats going through your mind as you write..its kind of strange aint it?

[Servant Ties]

lol...I liked it for I too write things like that, for I love the feel of a pen or a pencil, I love how when I hold one my mind is just endless and everything comes out onto the page leaving me raw and emotional

[Elizabeth]

"I am the ink that writes the letters,

found in the words, tangled in the phrases.

I am the phrases found in the lines,

and the lines bound together so that all rhymes"

That was my favorite part...
Good work.

[Ebs]

Wow. Really good poem. Liked it when i started reading loved it by the end. good one

Never stop writing

Ebs

[Legion]

To create a emotion - "an"

widdow - widow

reep - reap

Pretty cool concept. I like it.

[S.J.Floreen]

I enjoyed the rhyming in this one.