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Found

Found

A Poem by MsJewel
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~ a love poem ~

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photograph compliments of pinterest


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Rivers flow, oceans rise

behind the stars in his eyes

I’ve counted each one you see

bathed in reveries

of satin tides, waves of silk,

moonlight pale as milk

Drifting gently to the sound

of his heartbeat….

 

I am found

~~~


© 2017 MsJewel



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This is very smooth. The rhythm, the imagery, almost feels like the waves crashing and receding, or like a faint murmur on the ear.

"moonlight pale as milk" fav line.

Great ending too

"I am found"

Sudden. Almost like waking up from a reverie .

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

4 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie



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Gee
Beautiful.......................................

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Yeah. This one really works. Well crafted.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you :) Julie
Beautifully romantic and wonderfully expressed , the joy of love.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words :) Julie
I could help but think of my husband while reading this. Enjoyed, as always.

~Luna

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it Luna. Thanks so much :) Julie
You hit a cord with my heart strings here it could have verses to a song a very romantic song.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment :) Julie
Deeply moving words...so very romantic and filled with intense love. Just so lovely, Julie. Lydi**

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you Lydi :) Julie
Have you ever watched a show called "westworld"? Not the old Michael Crighton one, the new one with Anthony Hopkins and Rachel Evan Wood

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

I've never watched Westworld.
69 Station Wagons Full of Kung-Fu Fury

1 Year Ago

It's a little rough but I think you'd enjoy it. Give it a shot.
Romantic prose characterising the expression of your passionate love. Very nicely conveyed with elegance and quality.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your generous words :) julie
nice to read this small romantic bomb, and explode with it.



Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thanks so much :) Julie
Aloha Julie, this is so elegant and fragrant with romance. Beautiful writing. Izzy

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MsJewel

1 Year Ago

Thank you lovely lady. I'm thrilled you enjoyed it :) Julie

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Added on June 11, 2017
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Tags: romance, love, msjewel, poetry

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MsJewel
MsJewel

The Beach, CA



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I've been writing poetry for 15 years. My poetry isn't unique in any way, but it is written from the heart. I have trouble keeping up with everyone's poetry, so please send me rr's. I enjoy rec.. more..

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