One More

Baby I heard what you said
When you turned your back... 
To me 

And now I just wish that I could see 
More clearly 

Because everybody's gonna make a mistake some time 
But why oh why weren't you in my mind 
When we 

When we stayed up late at night 
I kiss and tell which makes us bite 

Just give me one more chance 
Give me one more fight 

Give me one more night 
Give me one more plight

Author's Note

A short poem a composed in November... I hope you enjoy it... And please give me some words of advice...

Reviews

[Chaos X 3]

A break up is never easy for both parties equally. Especially one that isn't clearly explained. I think that your poem clearly conveys the part of the 'breakee' and what you felt. Oh and how your heart will long for that "one more..." of everything, as though that last one would ever be enough. I liked your poem. Short and to the point, but doesn't lack any of the sadness that the subject requires. Great job!