01/10/16

01/10/16

A Poem by Kari Kush

That Sunday we kissed
I "felt nothing" but lips and tasted nothing but the weed we had smoked
I looked in your eyes and you looked in mine
I felt nothing but tears as I noticed you look through me
You looked at me, seen her and smiled
I looked at you and all I could see was my f*****g reflection in your eyes as you thought of someone else
that very moment at looking at me while looking at you I knew it was over
because truth is that Sunday we kissed
You felt nothing but lips as I felt my own heart break

© 2016 Kari Kush


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Dammmmm! Are you okay? I feel like I can feel the pain:'(

Posted 2 Years Ago


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This poem is really good, I enjoyed the way you expressed it with such confidence.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I can't make sense of the 7th line down. I can appreciate how open it is.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Last line is perfect. You're a natural.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kari Kush

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much I appreciate it
I know this feeling..well written...reminds me of a poem I wrote

Just a warm body
When you invited me over
i thought that you wanted
to see me
but when i saw
the sadness in your eyes
while we were making love
i realized you
just didn't want to be alone...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kari Kush

2 Years Ago

You're so talented thank you so much
terry smith

2 Years Ago

thank you for the compliment :D
Sad, honest and powerful words for love.
"You felt nothing but lips as I felt my own heart break"
When the heart know. The love is untrue. Make the heart more sad. Thank you Kari for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kari Kush

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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