Mind games, Tricks and Lies

Mind games, Tricks and Lies

A Poem by KenCarswell
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just a little something that came to me while fighting with the ex-girlfriend tonight

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Mind Games, Tricks and Lies

Mind games, tricks and lies,
The recipe to piss off guys,

Girls have it perfected,
Nailed down to a "T"
Sometimes they dont even see
How easy it can be
To say goodbye to me

© 2009 KenCarswell


Author's Note

KenCarswell
Just so everyone knows, I dont mean that every single girl in the world is this way, but you all do know that there are ALOT that are this way and my ex-girlfriend happens to be one of them.

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This was very comical yet very good. It was emotionally intriguing. I can recall a certain relationship whereas I was the you and you were I. In other words, my ex wrote the formula to pissing me off, played mind games, and told so many lies that if I could sale them I would be a millionare! And he inevitably was the one who should have said goodbye but I had to do it for him. I enjoyed reading this piece. You had so much weight in such a short piece. The battle of the genders lol. Excellent read! Keep exercising your gift. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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This was very comical yet very good. It was emotionally intriguing. I can recall a certain relationship whereas I was the you and you were I. In other words, my ex wrote the formula to pissing me off, played mind games, and told so many lies that if I could sale them I would be a millionare! And he inevitably was the one who should have said goodbye but I had to do it for him. I enjoyed reading this piece. You had so much weight in such a short piece. The battle of the genders lol. Excellent read! Keep exercising your gift. I look forward to reading more of your work.

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

wow great pome you dont know just how right your are this just happen to me i took it as lession learn

Posted 14 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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KenCarswell
KenCarswell

Bracebridge, Canada



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I am a 22 year old college student in Ontario and I find the easiest things to write about are love and heartbreak so the majority of my poems are based around those topics. Not all of my poems are b.. more..

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