You and I

The joys of puppy love at the beginning of a new relationship :)

You and I

We know we have something special,
It was obvious from the start,
We love eachother with all our hearts,
Dreading every second that we're apart

I would do anything for you,
The list never ends,
Just to see you smile
and know that we're Best Friends

We charish the times that we're together,
Making the times that we're apart
Seem like a cool breeze in the weather,
On a long walk in the park

One day we'll be together forever,
There'll be no Good-Byes,
We'll spend every night together,
Waking up, gazing into eachothers eyes

I love you Sweetie!

Reviews

[brandy]

wow thats great love this pome

[Michael X]

this is great, i fell where you are going, some refinement, i would delve for more original thoughts. at the same time you would be capturing the essense, but this is a great write. i give it a C-. if you revise it let me know.a 100/100 for sincerity