Lust or Love

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Why does this heart love
To beat for a man
That age more than me
Yet knows broken it will get

Is it the body that crave
For a body that age more than its own
Or craves for warmth
That a fleash could not give

Is it the fault of science
That has proven my love
Or is it the fault of Mathematics
Which spoke the language of my heart

Is this realy the fragile flaire
That drove people insane just to keep the burn
Or is it the burn of sin
That killed the pride of women

Tell me,is this the love that burns
And gives light throughout the day
Or is it the burn of passion
That gives warmth throughout the night

Reviews

[Irenic]

Amazing..................
The way you describe how much we get confuse between love and lust and how due to lust a woman loses its pride and a guy loses its control is doing justice with reality.
You are an amazing poet whose words defines reality in very realistic way.

Is it the fault of science
That has proven my love
Or is it the fault of Mathematics
Which spoke the language of my heart

it is epic......

Thanks for sharing..........:)

[andrew mitchell]

fourth stanza really instead of realy, i like the concept but in the second stanza you use crave twice and body, would be nice to eliminate both so its just one use, i see potential here for a great poem than a good poem here displayed but hey i'm no expert either.

[BlakHeart]

I'll take your advice. Thank you :)

[Ted Kniffen]

Good one, BlakHeart. The premise of love or lust between two people who seem to be quite different in age is good. The first two verses seem a little awkward compared to the last three.
I do like it.
Good one.

[BlakHeart]

It is realy akward on the part of the speaker. Thank you :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't know. Lust and love. I believe some kind of lust is needed for love. Both women and men need affection. I believe time for lust and time for love. Take two to tangle and two to love. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry. You make me think this morning.
Coyote

[BlakHeart]

thinking is a good breakfast you know :D

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree my friend.