In Love. . .

In Love. . .

A Poem by Kousika
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Love makes us a colorful butterfly..

"
“Close your eyes”


“What for? ?”


“Shhh.. just do it..”


“Okay..”

 


Air started losing it’s strength..

Vacuum started to fill the gap..

My heart’s race speeded up.

Your lips urged and came near..

came near to.. came near to mine..

It’s sweetness touched my eyes..

my nose.. then.. then.. it’s destiny..

 

At the same time, your fingers touched

my fingers.. held it.. distance

reduced.. Tightness became tighter..

My adrenaline even was feared.. afraid of..

My mind could only draw, redraw, re- redraw

your picture...

 

Eyes urged to see your face.. your feel of me..

my face in your eyes.. When eyelids

gave a way to see your face, your eyelids

became another wing to close mine..

I was moved..

 

 

Your hands slowly, surrounded my waist..

tightly.. tighter.. without my intervention

my lips touched your’s..

 

Suddenly legs lost in the battle of

holding your love and knees bent..

You eventually put your hand under

my legs and raised.. took me..

carried me to the lawn.. placed me slowly

upon the grass and came near me..


I could say this by your fragrance..

You whispered I love you my ammu..

Eyes forced it’s water to see you..

You caught it, told I am your ’s ..

Will you marry me again ??

 

How could I propose better than

giving you a hug flooded with kisses….. ? ! !!!!!

 

 


© 2015 Kousika



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I liked the story in the poem. Gentle erotic thoughts and places led to perfect ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Love the beginning, the way you create this nervous yet I love you to death rythm from the narrators point of view. Nicely written!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very loving relationship and love. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 2 Years Ago


simply romantic :) the feelings, the flow, emotions :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kousika

2 Years Ago

Thanks dear..
The flow of this poem is amazing. It kept me engaged in the poem to know what would happen next. One of the most romantic poems I have ever read. Lovely :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kousika

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind comments..
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Kat
I enjoyed reading this, it is very sweet and beautiful. I think it is very well written as well. Keep up the writing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kousika

2 Years Ago

Thanks for your kind review...
I liked the slow sensual build up with nice normal word exchange.The build up was right on time and I was wondering how you were going to handle this. The broken words was a workable idea. kudus there. I was caught off guard with "will you marry me again line"!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kousika

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kindness and concern.. How was my handling in the end ?? :))
Perkele.7885

2 Years Ago

To be honest, I think that you need something more sultry or provocative or evocative and the reader.. read more
Kousika

2 Years Ago

oh thank you.. surely i will keep in mind...
My feel in this situation goes like this.. How about you ??

Posted 2 Years Ago


Wow this is brilliant, beautiful, fantastic and all words of praise will always be less. It's a beautiful description of the situation that you have given here and 'a hug flooded with kisses' was beautiful.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Kousika

2 Years Ago

Oh .. Thank you Joshi.. Hope you loved it..

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Kousika
Kousika

Tamil Nadu, India



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