mails

Mails

 

 

What time is it in U.S?

I am at this side of world

Bowed before roaring sea,

Thousands of miles in between,

My fingers fumble on keys.

 Go ether! Carry my words

To a friend from timeless truth.

 

Waters of same shade currents,

Waves and waves commingles,

Nations obliterate in

The mist of minds sending mails

The truths change accordingly.

 

 

Reviews

[Blackbirdsong]

You really packed a lot of power and truth in such a short poem.

"Waters of same shade currents,
Waves and waves commingles,
Nations obliterate in
The mist of minds sending mails
The truths change accordingly."

You really have described the world that we live in. Great job with this one.

[Stonewall]

Yet despite it all nations are not irrelevant. But you're right, sometimes that feeling is strong.

[JC Fox]

Great poem, you captured the nature of snail mail versus email, and then the contemplation of whether the words you have written will reach those on the other side of the globe.

[Emily B]

Thanks for the words sent on the wind. My mind flew away to far off places. I have friends in unusual places now. I share my words. You share your words. We trade ideas with the click of our keys. I loved this piece.

[deepoet]

We are all the same, although miles apart....well done~!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Powerful. Enjoyed every line.


Great Write
Rayne

[T. R. Writer]

This reminds me of how I feel whenever I go to the beach and stare out into the ocean and imagine Africa and Europe some where on the other side of it. In so few words you have really recreated the world.

[Prose-full]

"I am at this side of world

Bowed before roaring sea,

Thousands of miles in between"...the way you expressed these lines gave me a clear visual..i really like that..
peace.ink.and write.
-shean...i am...

[Touché Armada]

This is one of those writes that reminds me of that collective conscious, of where the most people focus, causing possible change, I know I might be way off beat but just what it says to me. Even though many would think all that simple poppy c**k in any case.

[Theta S. T.]

Wow I love this piece the last stanza is the most powerful 5 sentences that I've ever read that flowed and painted a vivid picture

great write

~~Theta

[Imperfection]

This is the life we're living, aren't we?

The mist of minds sending mails

The truths change accordingly.

The last two lines are my favorite.
I enjoyed this piece a lot.