Rays of Sun

Golden rays shoot through

the clouds above, to fall on

Sakura below

Reviews

[Enar]

Nice work,
I like the first line especially, cuz it reads well with the title
and it ends nicely, although most haikus do.

It would be nice if you could look at some of my work...
"Sun" a poem about the sun
and / or
"Demon Cat" a haiku

[Alm]

Ahh. I can see the nice pink cherry blossom tree with the golden sunlight. Your haikus are amazing :) I love the mental image made in all of them!

-Alm

[Legolas]

Thanks:)

[❀ Gabriela ..]

Another brilliant haiku! You always use such great imagery when you write these, it's impossible not to get vivid mental pictures of these scenes you describe.
Really great job! :)

[Legolas]

Thanks so much:)

[Sujash I. Purna]

good write!

[Isabelle Faye]

This is wonderful, you capture the beauty of nature and the sun in just a few words. It creates a vivid image in my head of sunlight streaming through clouds as it sets.

[Legolas]

Thanks Isabelle:)

[Cheyenne Harris]

Awwww. This is good! Very simple but powerful. Awesome Imagery. Amzing write. :)

[Legolas]

Thank you very much:)

[Cheyenne Harris]

No problem. I love haikus. :)

[Legolas]

Me too:) I have lots more that I've published

[Cheyenne Harris]

Oooooh. I'll have to take a look. ^.^ I wrote one about Nilla Wafers. Lolz.

[Legolas]

Lol, I reviewed that one:)

[Cheyenne Harris]

Oh. I knew that.....