The Lonely

The Lonely

A Poem by Leigh Green

We are the lonely and together we stand
We crowd the streets, we are all around
We are the lonely and do not know how
To talk to each other, our minds won’t allow

Social constraint and too much stress
Make us lead the life of utter loneliness
If we could only stop to say hello
Then hell would go just by adding an ‘o’

We are the lonely, we do not speak
We are not elite, we are the many, the meek
On an average day we go out to work
We get our heads down and do not shirk

And then at night we go home to cold TV
There is no noisy you watching, only silent me
At night we dream of meeting a good friend
A problem to share, the boiler to mend.

Amelia Runcorn lies cold in her grave
No one misses her and what she gave
She lived alone on the forgotten estate
Seeing out her time with no one to relate

Dominic Lithgowe lived across the way
Every evening he’d close his eyes and pray
But gods don’t listen, they are rarely there
They leave hopeful pleas hanging in mid-air

Every face tells a story, every line a regret
A moment of hesitation, we try to forget
A chance swings by as real as concrete
Touching your senses, a feeling complete

When we were together in fields of light
We tasted the world and it felt so right
The sun stood high in its temple of sky
Blessing each one of us, telling us why

© 2018 Leigh Green



Author's Note

Leigh Green
My third book, Runner is complete and is available on Amazon

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I think this describes the lifestyle of more people than we know. Even people with families can feel this brand of solitude if the situation goes to pot or a significant other changes drastically over time into something bland or awful.

I think this is the best thing I've read here in a while. Well written, honest and relatable. . . good work.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leigh Green

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much, you have related to my poem so well. There are many locked in loveless marriage.. read more
JohnsDavidburg

2 Months Ago

You're very welcome and so on and so on.
Leigh Green

1 Week Ago

Ha ha, yes - thanks again



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WOW ! This is one of the best poems I’ve read!
So well written, the flow of your words amazing!
Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece. :)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Leigh Green

4 Days Ago

Thank you for your review that is great to hear
it is strange when people are happy everyone feels like a friend, but when we are down we feel alone even when we are with people we know. Excellent piece

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leigh Green

4 Days Ago

True, I agree, thanks for your comments :-)
I really love the second stanza, this is so good and written so well.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Leigh Green

4 Days Ago

Thank you very much - I am pleased
A well structured poem, interesting rhymes and a rhythm that suits the content. I think you portray the loneliness situation very well. Our society does seem to propagate this, many people living in isolation. You last verse gives the answer, and I hope to many people, it won't be 'were' but become 'are'. Good for you for writing this poem.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Absolute beauty!
In love with the piece.

Posted 1 Month Ago


This is the second one I have read today about "loneliness". A very good poem, every stanza told the deep truth of this condition. Thanks for posting this here at T.B.R.C.

Helena

Posted 1 Month Ago


Leigh Green

1 Month Ago

Thank you, it’s nice to be back
Helena

1 Month Ago

I'm glad you're back! I, too, have had a long break....I think we need it from time to time. Looki.. read more
Interesting to read about loneliness. I as well am part of this group. Sad because I relate to this but I know I'm not alone

Posted 2 Months Ago


Leigh Green

2 Months Ago

Hopefully, you may have taken a step away from loneliness by reading this
I recognized my past in this poem. When I was a lonely one. What you wrote is just the truth.
I know some people that still are lonely ones and they make me remember how lucky am I now that I have a family. I always try to talk and keep in contact to those people because everyone has a big value to share with others.
Great poem. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Leigh Green

3 Days Ago

This is nice to hear, thanks for sharing how this subject related to you
I think this describes the lifestyle of more people than we know. Even people with families can feel this brand of solitude if the situation goes to pot or a significant other changes drastically over time into something bland or awful.

I think this is the best thing I've read here in a while. Well written, honest and relatable. . . good work.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Leigh Green

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much, you have related to my poem so well. There are many locked in loveless marriage.. read more
JohnsDavidburg

2 Months Ago

You're very welcome and so on and so on.
Leigh Green

1 Week Ago

Ha ha, yes - thanks again
I agree my friend.
"Every face tells a story, every line a regret
A moment of hesitation, we try to forget
A chance swings by as real as concrete
Touching your senses, a feeling complete"
In a world of cell phone and no conversation. We have forgot human contact. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote


Posted 3 Months Ago


Leigh Green

3 Months Ago

Hi Coyote, really nice to hear from you after all this time. Hope all is well with you.
Coyote Poetry

2 Months Ago

Was my pleasure and I'm okay. I hope you are doing well my friend.

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Leigh Green

Bristol, United Kingdom



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