Long lonely Nights

Those long lonely nights

When your head is full of wonder

You softly close your eyes

Though you get no slumber

Pictures in your mind

Strange thoughts start to appear

You try to wish them all away

It's only Insomnia you hear

Those long lonely nights

When you try hard to fall asleep

Tossing and Turning

Even counting sheep

Small raindrops on the window

Or traffic on the street

Nothing is helping

Your mind is on repeat

Reviews

[Rebel]

I know that feeling way too well. Nicely said.

[Abhishekizy]

Wonderful end to the write - "Nothing is helping
Your mind is on repeat". I love your thought process. It might be complicated but you don't puzzle it up in your writes.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"Pictures in your mind
Strange thoughts start to appear
You try to wish them all away
It's only Insomnia you hear"

Those long nights are a real burden when you actually want to get rid of the stupid thoughts creeping up your mind. I can relate to this.

You've written this nicely.

[Lexi Wilkins]

I agree they are a real burden and thank you for pointing out my grammar error, I completely missed that. I wrote this early in the morning and didn't pay much attention. Thank you! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! I'll edit my review now 😉
It's definitely a good read 😊👍