Love The Way You Lie (part III)

My take at the verses of Love The Way You Lie (part II)

Listen to the link provided as you read the lyrics. It is the piano track to accompany. 

http://youtu.be/jNouBI9ze2M

Verse:

Theres an angel,

in the window,

her tears have turned to rain,

And we drag this on forever,

even though we're out of time.

And we hang on thoughts of broken dreams

these empty nights to new extremes,

but you'll always be my hero 

even when you have to leave.

Chorus:

Just gonna stand there and watch me burn

But that's alright because I like the way it hurts,

Just gonna stand there and hear me cry

But that's alright because I love the way you lie

I love the way you lie

Ohhh, I love the way you lie..

Verse:

Now theres teardrops,

in our stories,

all the lies and endless fights,

all the words that left us broken

now just pushed us to this night,

and we only get one chance to live

one chance to show just what to give,

and you'll always be my angel

for the sins I can't forgive.

Chorus:

Just gonna stand there and watch me burn

But that's alright because I like the way it hurts,

Just gonna stand there and hear me cry

But that's alright because I love the way you lie

I love the way you lie

Ohhh, I love the way you lie

Bridge:

So maybe I'm a masochist,

I try to run but I don't wanna ever leave,

Til the walls are going up,

In smoke with all our memories.

-Piano Solo-

Chorus (3:55);

Just gonna stand there and watch me burn

But that's alright because I like the way it hurts,

Just gonna stand there and hear me cry

But that's alright because I love the way you lie

I love the way you lie (x4)

Author's Note

A friend was joking around with me saying that if I took the piano track and put my own verses to it, that she would sing it, so even though it was a joke, a couple hours later heres what I got. Enjoy :)
http://youtu.be/jNouBI9ze2M (piano track)

Reviews

[stars are far]

This was perfectly amazing..
I loved it just as all of your writes i just wait for them lol..

[Lily Mae]

I think you did an excellent write..x

[Tainted Devotion]

Loved this so much. Really loved the second verse. Very well done.

[idk]

Wow. Love it

[Coyote Poetry]

Great flow of words and a lot of emotion and desire in the words. Take talent to write words for music and make sense. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Ashley]

Wow great job

[Alana McGuire]

Ohh holy wow, this is epic!! I literally just listened to the song Love the Way You Lie and then I saw your read request for this and I thought it was so neat. You're extremely talented. Music and words! Thank you for sharing :)

[Brook Hughes]

wow... i am very impressed! that is my most favortie song ever and you did an awesome job at changing up the lyrics:) I love singing and rapping along to this song:) Great write:)