Not your victims

Not your victims

A Poem by Lorenzo94

Don't need your medication
I'm not subscribed to your monthly subscriptions
Our minds are not your prisons
These human beings are not your victims.

Don't tell us how to be
don't tell us how to look
We know ourselves
We don't follow rules from your book
You kept the truth hidden, 
You tried to impose fear
But, we know the futures strange;
We know the end is near.

One day we all shall rise 
when our conscience becomes clear
You may try to keep us down;
But we will always be here. 

© 2017 Lorenzo94

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This is raw and very well rhymed, the bars are neat and the meaning is heavy... I enjoyed this quite a bit... Stay apathetic to the rule book... Excellently penned...

Posted 1 Year Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Powerful words and thoughts. I liked the energy and the drive in the words. I agree. Can't control all things and all people. Limit on all things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 1 Year Ago

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1 Year Ago

Thanks again! Always appreciate the comments. Yeah this is how it feels like sometimes being apart o.. read more
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1 Year Ago

You are right. Sometimes we must walk away and find a better place to be. You are welcome.

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Added on February 25, 2017
Last Updated on February 25, 2017



United Kingdom

Lover of the simple things in life....poetry, music, nature, animals, spirituality and of course love. more..


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