until our forever

"lily" by daniela mar

you pull me back towards myself
with your special brand of gravity
you surround me with your loving logic
then pour me into your arms
just one more time
one for the road as it were
a steady slow rain of emotion falls
desire blossoms
in this half dream - half reality moment

mon amour
perhaps it has all been said before
but i must tell you once more
with feeling
when the sun embraces the sea
when the moon kisses the stars
               until our forever
i love you

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and sweet words for love.
"when the sun embraces the sea
when the moon kisses the stars
until our forever
i love you"
The music of love never leaved us. Thank you Lydia for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Your reviews touch me, John. Thank you so much. Lydi**

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Lydia.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Elegant articulation of your undying love and eternal devotion.
More than enough to entice "one for the road."
Utterly lovely, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Jimmy. It's wonderful how you dig into my older poems. I appreciate it. Lydi**

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you are such a romantic, Lydi... these words paint the most wonderful images...love the personification in fourth and third last lines...

[Lydia Shutter]

I suppose I always will be a romantic. It is a huge part of who I am. Thanks, FT. Lydi**

[Indra Neil]

beautiful write with superb metaphors! Thank u for sharing this wonderful write!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you, Indra. I appreciate your review. Lydi**

[Indra Neil]

u r most welcome Ms.Lydia!

[Ruth]

Lydi, this gave my heart a wide smile, such elegant sentiments here, a love with no boundaries and grace, just beautiful xo

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, Poppy. Lydi**

[Xella Poetry]

This is an amazing piece of work. I love the half-dream half-reality description of the moment you used!

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Allex. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Very romantic and very delicate in its beauty. You transport us into the Divine realm of embracing oneness and beauty...Excellent...:)............

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Sami. Hope you are enjoying the holiday weekend. Lydi**

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome. .... :).... ....

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Lydi, this poem is so gentle...
"when the sun embraces the sea💍
when the moon kisses the stars...
until our forever..". Mermaids dream of
such desire. truly, Pat

[Lydia Shutter]

Awww, Pat, you are so sweet. Thank you very much. Lydi**

[Cassie]

I have missed reading you. This is superb

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you so much, Cassie. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

You make everyday a holiday for lovers only, Lydi.

"when the sun embraces the sea
when the moon kisses the stars
until our forever
i love you"

Have a wonderful 4th, my friend...and fireworks galore!

Kelly

[Lydia Shutter]

The very same to you, Kelly. Thanks for the review. Lydi**