the last word

a poem i wrote back in 2006 that is still relevant now.

courtesy of carolcgood.com

The last word....I have heard
is what some folks desire
For it they’ll fight...with all their might
filled with brimstone and much fire

But far more smart....tis an ancient art
to let it peacefully ride
To simply ignore....avoid the war
till unfriendly sparks subside

Yes, last, not first...truly is the worst
contrary to popular belief
Seal your lips....come to grips
to achieve the greatest relief.

© 2006 Lydia Shutter

Reviews

[Sanober]

Only you could have delivered a sensible message in such a witty and elegant way. yes, this is absolutely relevant, even now, and until humans walk the earth. ah, if only people knew the true value of shutting up. lol. you have the wisdom of the sages, and the skill of all poets combined. Love this!

[Lydia Shutter]

The wisdom of the sages? Only because I am THAT old! LOL Thanks so much, Sanober...you probably read this the first time around too. Lydi**

[Sanober]

LoL, well I'm sure you've had this wisdom since you were a young woman! :)

[Lydia Shutter]

You are a sweetie. Thanks, Sanober. Lydi**

[Paul Bell]

Yes, the last word junkies, you just know they can start wars.
Usually find as they're still mouthing off, someone's completing the job.

[Lydia Shutter]

You are so right, Paul. Thank you. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

Indeed. It seems too many people just cannot let fires burn themselves out. Your wisdom, as well as your rhyming prowess shine through. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Jim. Lydi**

[DevKass92]

Great poem! Loved the rhyming and rhythmic structure. An easy read that leaves you thinking.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Dev. Lydi**

[redzone]

Lydi besides being a poet, you also write philosophy... whoa... it is true, far too many just want to "win", have the last word.. they talk over people, never even hearing yet alone understanding what others are saying... how did we go from those early years of our youth when we were taught "sharing" (of toys and yes ideas) to this madness of everything to win???? seems like we understood more back then and became more stupid as we aged... of course there are some who have thankfully reverted to their childhood and have relearned how to listen!!! and of course to listen is to do so with your mouth shut!!! good philosophy Lydi and dare I say, you were pretty damn smart 10 years ago too!! ;0) but I also suspect you have the heart of a 4 year old... yes, it's a "nice" one...

redzone

[Lydia Shutter]

I will always be young at heart, Curt. Giggling with friends and taking an afternoon nap will solve just about any problem, doncha know? Thanks so much for the "nice" review. Lydi**

[Ted Kniffen]

If only our beloved politicians of all stripes would pay heed. It would be a batter world, indeed. Well done Lydi. Good write.

[Lydia Shutter]

Thanks so much, Ted. Lydi**

[barleygirl]

This is sooooo relevant, always relevant . . . I think many TV reality shows model yelling & ranting as if it were the number one problem solver! Not to mention the prez race which is doing quite a bit of that, too! Your message is perfectly & peacefully stated to convey a possibility I wish many people would consider!

[Lydia Shutter]

Yes, the Presidential race would do well to read and heed these words! Thank you so much, Margie. Lydi**

[Ruth]

Most sensible thing I have heard in a while dear Lydi :) I am not one to try and have the last word, was raised around that too much myself so I understand this :)

[Lydia Shutter]

thanks so much, Poppy. Lydi**

[Kelly Scheppers]

Wow, I believe this is the first time I've ever read a rhyme from you! Funny, how things from years past are still relevant today. I heard a song by Aerosmith, "Living On the Edge" the other day, and I googled it because I couldn't believe how pertinent the lines were.

Makes you wonder about ten or twenty years from now if it'll be the same! Good piece, Lydi!

[Lydia Shutter]

Living on the edge...yes very relevant. I do rhyme from time to time. 😀 Thanks for the review Kelly. Lydi***

[Coyote Poetry]

I loved the thoughts and the logic of this poem.
"Yes, last, not first...truly is the worst
contrary to popular belief
Seal your lips....come to grips
to achieve the greatest relief."
The above lines. Trickery of words leading to solid ending. Thank you Lydia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Lydia Shutter]

Thank you very much, John. Lydi***

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Lydia.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

most times, i will just say "touche" and let it ride...

wow, sealing the lips is often best....

your poem reminds me of BTO...
"would you fly if i told you that i lied, would you say good bye or would you let it ride"

love the next to last line, significantly.

[Lydia Shutter]

Bachman Turner Overdrive.....used to love their music. Still do really. Thanks for the review, Jacob. Lydi**