What is this hold he has over me?

What is this hold he has over me?

A Poem by Magdelena
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The power of seduction can be blinding as the brightest of all lights.

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What is this feeling?
This hold he has over me?
Like fire burning through veins open and seeping,
liquid lava running deep inside.
I savor all.
Each searing touch,
engulfing my very essence.
Oh such power he has!
Such complete control.
And I am lost!
Inside all he brings forth
Giving in with such abandonment,
that I can not control myself.
That the very essence of his being
brings forth such need, desire.
To feel his touch?
Oh......
I would walk across desserts to nowhere.
And his voice...
Oh the sweetness it brings.
Whispering softly in my ear his longing
Desires that I alone he says can only quench his thirst.
The darkness of his eyes hypnotizing me
Holding me in his power.
And I bask in its glory...
This man!
The one who holds me in his power of delight
Desire
Need
A power so Strong,
that to fight..
Oh no...
This I can not do.
Instead I walk willingly.
Like a fly to a spider,
deep into his web.
And I wonder....

What is this hold he has over me?
Then wonder no more, as he gently takes me into his arms....

 

© 2012 Magdelena



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A very sensual write. The emotion is palpable, I love it! The pacing was really good, as well. Nice work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


nice work Mags...your thoughts give us that overpowering emotion of seduction mixed within the view of one who is left helpless...helpless in a good way, you ending....as he gently takes me into his arms.... completes it...

Posted 4 Years Ago


I savor all
each searing touch
A nice write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


A lovely write and I think there is no one in this world except God who can measure up to this love.

So spiritually great!

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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