Who's going to save my soul

Who's going to save my soul

A Poem by Magdelena
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Sometimes we get lost along our way...

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Defenseless, I am.
Like a tree against the strongest winds
Branches being bent, torn and thrown about.
I am invisible, movement still, cries silent.
Yet I breathe.
The sound slow, timid,
Against all around.
Nothing matters, nothing has meaning.
For the light has slowly faded,
Hope has left,
Is there more?

Who's going to save my soul?


© 2015 Magdelena



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It's a question many ask at different times for different reasons. Very human write. Many will get it.

Posted 7 Months Ago


We all know the answer to that question. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


We all know the answer to that question. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


I believe that we can only save our our soul... with that said, I love this poem, it expresses how we all feel sometime in our live.

Posted 2 Years Ago


i like the general flow of this poem up till the end

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on October 14, 2015
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Magdelena
Magdelena

Charlotte, NC



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Hello to all; Been awhile since I been on. Most know me, some don't. Hopefully I can get to know the few that don't and catch up with all the other fine fellow poets/friends that have become so.. more..

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