Four Elements of Nature

Love
The four elements of nature
Love is Wind
As she wraps me in warmth
She cools me down
Love
The four elements of nature
Love is Fire
As she warms my heart
She scares my soul
Love
The four elements of nature
Love is Water
As she is gracefully dance
She emits power
Love
The four elements of nature
Love is Earth
As she supports me
She give me life

Love

Wind Fire Water & Earth

Author's Note

Quickly done.. may not be well written

Reviews

[Shy Girl]

That's very pretty. I liked the way you brought it all together there at the ending. She means a great deal to you...your rock. :)

[reflectingus]

I love the comparison of love with the four elements of nature, that's very creative, how you matched the descriptions beautifully. However, I felt as if the repetition of 'The four elements of nature' in the beginning of each stanza was unnecessary, I felt it didn't help with the flow. Maybe you could change it a little for each stanza? But then, that's just me being extra picky, nevertheless I enjoyed reading.

[Southern Cross]

If you want honesty , yes it still needs some fine tuning but the premise, the context is beautifully written and espressed..some grammatical errors that can be fixed..I tend to post when the thought is there as well..so no worries still amazing

[Sleeping Maiden]

Oooo..i love the way you used the 4 elements here. =) Beautiful, stunning, peaceful, just lovely really!! i enjoyed the read!! Great job!! Well done!

[r. f. jordan]

these are interesting ideas on this piece, and the use of color on font helps organize it. thank you for sharing your ideas with this site, and i love the Cohen quote on your page.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like how you used the elements. I agree with your thoughts. I believe we are one people and one earth. We must have concern for the planet and the people. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Khal Attero]

May not be well written? Dude,this is fantastic!