SADNESS TOWN

SADNESS TOWN

A Poem by Manel

sadness,

feeling in the heart

but changes every thing

it takes away the light

but darkness stays

 

In that town,

there is no laugh, not a smile

only pain and tears are residence 

you'll find anger, fight walking

side by side when peace is barried

 

In sadness town,

 lives the broken hearts

full of wounds and scars,

tortured souls with no mates  

 where love by hateress is replaced

 

in a world of black,

pain , tears are the paycheck

if you come in . no way back 




© 2017 Manel



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I like this because you employ a time-honoured tradition of personifying a feeling, a state of mind, as a real place, a town. This actually reflects reality more than you might think. There are places called Hopeful, Active, Normal and others !!

I love the use of the word 'hateress' - a new one on me. The description of the town is truly horrific. Well done.


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

6 Months Ago

thank you so much for this comment



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I like this because you employ a time-honoured tradition of personifying a feeling, a state of mind, as a real place, a town. This actually reflects reality more than you might think. There are places called Hopeful, Active, Normal and others !!

I love the use of the word 'hateress' - a new one on me. The description of the town is truly horrific. Well done.


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

6 Months Ago

thank you so much for this comment
The personification really works here. I especially like this concept :
you'll find anger, fight walking
side by side

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

6 Months Ago

thank you Shannon
Thank you Manel for sharing this poem. I liked the way you described sadness town, its residence and how the town actually formed. Keep the good work. Cheers!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

7 Months Ago

thanks a lot i glad you liked it christina
Christina

6 Months Ago

my pleasure Manel
I've been here before but I was glad to get out.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

7 Months Ago

Iam happy for you Michael
*sadness,
feeling in the heart
but changes every thing
it takes away the light
but darkness stays"

That's a heart touching write. Realistic too. Sadness really makes us forget the good things around us...
Nicely penned 👍


Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

7 Months Ago

thank you yumna Kay glad that you like it
Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

You're welcome, Manel! It was a pleasure 😊
a sad town for sure,a tear jerker ,well written

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

7 Months Ago

thank you wordman
"there is no laugh, not a smile
only pain and tears are residence
you'll find anger, fight walking
side by side when peace is barried"

A good title and poem. It can be a realistic story...:)............

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

7 Months Ago

thank you sami

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