SADNESS TOWN

SADNESS TOWN

A Poem by Manel

sadness,

feeling in the heart

but changes every thing

it takes away the light

but darkness stays

 

In that town,

there is no laugh, not a smile

only pain and tears are residence 

you'll find anger, fight walking

side by side when peace is barried

 

In sadness town,

 lives the broken hearts

full of wounds and scars,

tortured souls with no mates  

 where love by hateress is replaced

 

in a world of black,

pain , tears are the paycheck

if you come in . no way back 




© 2017 Manel



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I like this because you employ a time-honoured tradition of personifying a feeling, a state of mind, as a real place, a town. This actually reflects reality more than you might think. There are places called Hopeful, Active, Normal and others !!

I love the use of the word 'hateress' - a new one on me. The description of the town is truly horrific. Well done.


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

11 Months Ago

thank you so much for this comment
goldifada

1 Month Ago

well done sweety i like your work :) keep doing that good job
Manel

1 Month Ago

thanks honey happy you liked it



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Very poetic and I love the flow, This is very creative, kinda sad but really good

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

1 Month Ago

so sweet of you thank you
This is really good, enjoyed the flow of words. very creative write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Manel

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading my poem kimberly
Reminds me of Hotel California

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

1 Month Ago

thank you Amber
I like this because you employ a time-honoured tradition of personifying a feeling, a state of mind, as a real place, a town. This actually reflects reality more than you might think. There are places called Hopeful, Active, Normal and others !!

I love the use of the word 'hateress' - a new one on me. The description of the town is truly horrific. Well done.


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

11 Months Ago

thank you so much for this comment
goldifada

1 Month Ago

well done sweety i like your work :) keep doing that good job
Manel

1 Month Ago

thanks honey happy you liked it
The personification really works here. I especially like this concept :
you'll find anger, fight walking
side by side

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

11 Months Ago

thank you Shannon
Thank you Manel for sharing this poem. I liked the way you described sadness town, its residence and how the town actually formed. Keep the good work. Cheers!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

11 Months Ago

thanks a lot i glad you liked it christina
Christina

10 Months Ago

my pleasure Manel
I've been here before but I was glad to get out.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

11 Months Ago

Iam happy for you Michael
*sadness,
feeling in the heart
but changes every thing
it takes away the light
but darkness stays"

That's a heart touching write. Realistic too. Sadness really makes us forget the good things around us...
Nicely penned 👍


Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

11 Months Ago

thank you yumna Kay glad that you like it
Dr YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

You're welcome, Manel! It was a pleasure 😊
a sad town for sure,a tear jerker ,well written

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

11 Months Ago

thank you wordman
"there is no laugh, not a smile
only pain and tears are residence
you'll find anger, fight walking
side by side when peace is barried"

A good title and poem. It can be a realistic story...:)............

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

11 Months Ago

thank you sami

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