if only

if only

A Poem by Manel
"

the thoughts of a child in a disfenctional family

"
If only ,

They loved each other
I would be better
And even brighter
Full of laughter 
Not hiding in a shaltter
Scared of traiters 

if only,

I could understand 
What went wrong in the end
Is love maint to fade
Or  a sattelment has been made
It's more like a shade 
With a lower grade 

If only ,

I was the parent 
Swith places in the present 
To see what was the best 
If you stayed or that you left
Was it hard to forget? 
All about us as time went 
not a call neither a message sent

"If only," is just a word 
that Iam using to explore 
the chance of end the war
that's around me for sure
but Iam just a child 
 And the children are maint 
to be in the middle of this event 
no matter how hart it gets 
I wish i can do something but I can't  

© 2019 Manel


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Interesting and thought-provoking! Sometimes the situations around our up-bringing causes us to rethink about the different outcomes. Yet, at the same time look at how great of a person you are now. I'd say you are who you are for a reason and I want to see you grow even more.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

1 Year Ago

true sometimes situation forrge us to be the way we are and no matter how bad they are we should kee.. read more



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Whoa, this is amazingly written. I like the self argumentative poetic style here. It gave volumes to the title. Tyfs

Posted 10 Months Ago


Interesting and thought-provoking! Sometimes the situations around our up-bringing causes us to rethink about the different outcomes. Yet, at the same time look at how great of a person you are now. I'd say you are who you are for a reason and I want to see you grow even more.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

1 Year Ago

true sometimes situation forrge us to be the way we are and no matter how bad they are we should kee.. read more
Heartfelt words that touch on some deep feelings

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

2 Years Ago

thank you for passing by
and i know you would if you could,,happy valentines

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Manel

2 Years Ago

happy valentines my friend
thanks
 wordman

2 Years Ago

you`re welcome
thank you friends for passing by and taking the time to read my poem
i hope you enjoyed reading it

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Manel
Manel

Oued Rhiou, Islam, Algeria



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hey guys , Iam Manel a dreamy girl from Algeria i love to write from time to time so i wanted to share it with you i welocome every comment and review and every friend on this site Be kind to on.. more..

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