Still Breathing

Sitting still breathing heavy
Searching inside for something that shines light upon this new view of life.
Yourself, inside you.
It's the only answer to know you can handle it, handle you.
Still heavy, not sure if the still breathing is good...
I live here in this place, it's not ideal but I have grown fond of it.
A place where nostalgia is crippled and smiles are broken.

Reviews

[Ezel_Amaru]

I enjoyed the word play and how you put yourself into the piece
To let it breathe .
Well done

[jwesley]

"A place where nostalgia is crippled and smiles are broken." Wow! What a series of words. Really enjoyed this piece.

j.

[Mjay55]

J, I truly appreciate your comment.... It made my heart smile... Thank you.