Depth

Depth

A Poem by Ana B.

This shady world, with lines so blurry

Will end when the last word will be said.

When the last passage of this journey

Will be inevitably read.

 

And then, who will remember

The melting moon resting on the lake…

The maple rain that falls in September…

The flaming sun, always wide awake…

 

The crimson rose of a kiss

Brought by the dew as a gift…

Our breaths’ everlasting eclipse

In cardamom dreams slightly dipped…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



© 2015 Ana B.



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Ana B.

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I like this short and sweet composition, placing perfect suitable scenarios.. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Ana B.

1 Month Ago

Thank you :)
Love that kind words and wonderful works added the music of yesteryear Makes for great poetry and music to my ears.

Posted 11 Months Ago


stunned... the image, the writing


well donee

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much Jada :)
Gosh, this is beautiful. Such lavish use of vocabulary in the final line. This is a comfortable piece, in that real good way.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you very much :)
Your words float.. tis as if you're watching an island floating off and away from you, shrouded in mist.. on and on.. on and on... and with it goes sound.. warmth. Finding your words sad..could be so easily drawn into the happening..

Guess you know how to make words take a hold of a reader.. how to write beautiful language with darkness nonetheless present. Extraordinary.


Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Perhaps you're right, but i would rather people laugh and put the ''fun'' in my funeral ya know...si.. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Not silly... or, if you are, so am i! Must disappear for a while.. take care of you. please.
Ana B.

1 Year Ago

you do the same dear.
Such an appropriate title because this has mad depth. Your pen has skills and every poet has something that sets them apart. You have this delicacy in your writing that captivates. Always a joy to read your work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the stunning words dear duff :)
duff

1 Year Ago

You are very welcome Ana.
Very well-written!!
"This shady world, with lines so blurry
Will end when the last word will be said.
When the last passage of this journey
Will be inevitably read."

Loved reading it.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you :)
Ghania

1 Year Ago

You're Welcome.
beautifully written !! great expressions describing the hidden secrets of the world and whats to come out of it !!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Ana B.

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the sweet words Pia :)
Well penned!
As always your view on this piece is fantastic and my opinion
right on the money:)
Always enjoy reading your work!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana B.

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much James.
really an awesome piece of self realization of the truth about the world and life

Posted 3 Years Ago


Ana B.

3 Years Ago

Thank you Basit :)

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