Depth

Depth

A Poem by Ana B.

This shady world, with lines so blurry

Will end when the last word will be said.

When the last passage of this journey

Will be inevitably read.

 

And then, who will remember

The melting moon resting on the lake…

The maple rain that falls in September…

The flaming sun, always wide awake…

 

The crimson rose of a kiss

Brought by the dew as a gift…

Our breaths’ everlasting eclipse

In cardamom dreams slightly dipped…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



© 2015 Ana B.



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Gosh, this is beautiful. Such lavish use of vocabulary in the final line. This is a comfortable piece, in that real good way.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Ana B.

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much :)
Your words float.. tis as if you're watching an island floating off and away from you, shrouded in mist.. on and on.. on and on... and with it goes sound.. warmth. Finding your words sad..could be so easily drawn into the happening..

Guess you know how to make words take a hold of a reader.. how to write beautiful language with darkness nonetheless present. Extraordinary.


Posted 2 Months Ago


Ana B.

2 Months Ago

Perhaps you're right, but i would rather people laugh and put the ''fun'' in my funeral ya know...si.. read more
emmajoy

2 Months Ago

Not silly... or, if you are, so am i! Must disappear for a while.. take care of you. please.
Ana B.

2 Months Ago

you do the same dear.
Such an appropriate title because this has mad depth. Your pen has skills and every poet has something that sets them apart. You have this delicacy in your writing that captivates. Always a joy to read your work.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Ana B.

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the stunning words dear duff :)
method

2 Months Ago

You are very welcome Ana.
Very well-written!!
"This shady world, with lines so blurry
Will end when the last word will be said.
When the last passage of this journey
Will be inevitably read."

Loved reading it.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Ana B.

2 Months Ago

Thank you :)
NerdyBeauty

2 Months Ago

You're Welcome.
beautifully written !! great expressions describing the hidden secrets of the world and whats to come out of it !!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Ana B.

2 Months Ago

Thank you for the sweet words Pia :)
Well penned!
As always your view on this piece is fantastic and my opinion
right on the money:)
Always enjoy reading your work!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much James.
really an awesome piece of self realization of the truth about the world and life

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you Basit :)
Hello Miss Ana, Your writing is on a different level now,
But I'm glad That you hanged on to your own style and
Character, , I can still see that nature loving, goodwill
ambassador poetic justice writer,, this poem flows perfectly
With intense and colorful words that makes this a soothing
read about depth, well done! :-) love the picture as well :-)
Thanks!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the wonderful words EG :)
And then, who will remember
The melting moon resting on the lake…
The maple rain that falls in September…
The flaming sun, always wide awake…

a most scintillating poem, sheer delight Ana :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you dear Richard :D
I love the way you worded this entire poem... there is so much beauty in it! "This shady world, with lines so blurry Will end when the last word will be said." I love those first two lines and the impact it has on the read... another great write Ana :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much dear Aaron :)

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