Omnipresence

Omnipresence

A Poem by Ana B.

I wish I knew how to savor

This eternal odyssey of mind.

That nictitating , addictive flavor

Left the recesses of my heart entwined…

 

And on my way to awe

I got lost in the beauty…

Unknowingly following the law

That lights up the universe so smoothly;

 

That the ageless watchers of the storm

Have indolently inhaled,

Helping ‘’the unthinkable’’ gain a form

And ‘’the unknown’’ to be unveiled.

 

Will that silky glimpse of truth

Teach how to disappear completely?



 



 


© 2017 Ana B.



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Ana B.

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enjoy all you have to say in a poetry way

Posted 3 Months Ago


Ana B.

3 Months Ago

i am enjoying, thank you
You have wonderful way with words. I love your writing. Keep up the great work.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Ana B.

7 Months Ago

Thank you very much :)
i really enjoyed reading this piece. good job, i love it !!

Posted 9 Months Ago


Ana B.

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much XOXO
'and on my way to awe i got lost in beauty'
great wording - still working out the poem but i'm blaming my fried brain and tired eyes - not your ability, Great read

Posted 11 Months Ago


Ana B.

11 Months Ago

Thank you Patrick :)
Another wonderful piece of writing!
Well done.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Ana B.

11 Months Ago

Thank you Rassoul :)
Rassoul

11 Months Ago

You're so welcomed, Ana.
Easy to get lost. Hard to forget.
"And on my way to awe
I got lost in the beauty…
Unknowingly following the law
That lights up the universe so smoothly;"
The above lines stood out for me. To be lost in the perfection of beauty. A needed place to know. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 11 Months Ago


Ana B.

11 Months Ago

Thank you for the beautiful words John :)
Coyote Poetry

11 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Ana.
This is beautifully constructed. Intellectually stimulating and moving.

"Unknowingly following the law
That lights up the universe so smoothly;

i really like that line. Great work.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Ana B.

11 Months Ago

Thank you duff! :)
duff

11 Months Ago

You're very welcome!
' And on my way to awe ~ I got lost in the beauty…'

to feel like that, to attain such emotion is head-reeling, heart-storming.. it is Everything. Perhaps it's akin to reincarnation, returning each time to attain that richer, kinder, generous point.. and one's spirit is absorbed in light absolute. And, thus - disappear, but, willingly
Perhaps?

Posted 11 Months Ago


Ana B.

11 Months Ago

Willingly indeed, because, in this particular instance (my writing) disappearing means a complete an.. read more
Lovely and lyrical. Imagery that holds the reader in thrall. Whisps of gossamer. The formless aspiring to form. Yes, "this eternal odyssey of mind"...Stellar.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Ana B.

11 Months Ago

Thank you for the wonderful words Annette :)
Such a killer opener, "I wish I knew how to savor
This eternal odyssey of mind." I just loved this.
I always admire your vocab. and word choice and how your poems always take me adrift.
Awesome write Ana!

Posted 11 Months Ago


Ana B.

11 Months Ago

Thank you very much David :)

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