Omnipresence

Omnipresence

A Poem by Ana B.

I wish I knew how to savor

This eternal odyssey of mind.

That nictitating , addictive flavor

Left the recesses of my heart entwined…

 

And on my way to awe

I got lost in the beauty…

Unknowingly following the law

That lights up the universe so smoothly;

 

That the ageless watchers of the storm

Have indolently inhaled,

Helping ‘’the unthinkable’’ gain a form

And ‘’the unknown’’ to be unveiled.

 

Will that silky glimpse of truth

Teach how to disappear completely?



 



 


© 2017 Ana B.



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You have wonderful way with words. I love your writing. Keep up the great work.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Ana B.

1 Month Ago

Thank you very much :)
i really enjoyed reading this piece. good job, i love it !!

Posted 3 Months Ago


Ana B.

3 Months Ago

Thank you very much XOXO
'and on my way to awe i got lost in beauty'
great wording - still working out the poem but i'm blaming my fried brain and tired eyes - not your ability, Great read

Posted 5 Months Ago


Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Thank you Patrick :)
Another wonderful piece of writing!
Well done.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Thank you Rassoul :)
Rassoul

5 Months Ago

You're so welcomed, Ana.
Easy to get lost. Hard to forget.
"And on my way to awe
I got lost in the beauty…
Unknowingly following the law
That lights up the universe so smoothly;"
The above lines stood out for me. To be lost in the perfection of beauty. A needed place to know. Thank you Ana for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote


Posted 5 Months Ago


Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Thank you for the beautiful words John :)
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Ana.
This is beautifully constructed. Intellectually stimulating and moving.

"Unknowingly following the law
That lights up the universe so smoothly;

i really like that line. Great work.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Thank you duff! :)
duff

5 Months Ago

You're very welcome!
' And on my way to awe ~ I got lost in the beauty…'

to feel like that, to attain such emotion is head-reeling, heart-storming.. it is Everything. Perhaps it's akin to reincarnation, returning each time to attain that richer, kinder, generous point.. and one's spirit is absorbed in light absolute. And, thus - disappear, but, willingly
Perhaps?

Posted 5 Months Ago


Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Willingly indeed, because, in this particular instance (my writing) disappearing means a complete an.. read more
Lovely and lyrical. Imagery that holds the reader in thrall. Whisps of gossamer. The formless aspiring to form. Yes, "this eternal odyssey of mind"...Stellar.

Posted 5 Months Ago


Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Thank you for the wonderful words Annette :)
Such a killer opener, "I wish I knew how to savor
This eternal odyssey of mind." I just loved this.
I always admire your vocab. and word choice and how your poems always take me adrift.
Awesome write Ana!

Posted 5 Months Ago


Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much David :)
Ok, aceasta este prima recenzie in romana pe care o fac aici, deci… Da!
Un sentiment mai ciudat s-a aprins inauntrul meu si am simtit ca trebuie sa fac aceasta recenzie in romana =)))

Revenind, Ai niste poeme foarte deep, descrii totul intr-un mod remarcabil si mi-a placut intotdeauna ce imagini ai ales.

Mi-a placut foarte mult si acest poem, bineinteles. L-am citit de mai multe ori si sentimentul meu nu s-a schimbat in privinta poemului.
Deci, da!:))
Felicitari.

100/100

Posted 5 Months Ago


Jes' Pi

5 Months Ago

Poate putem face o colaborare..într-o zi
Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Poate, cu totate ca eu sunt mai mult solo-writer....nu prea imi ies colaborarile :)
Jes' Pi

5 Months Ago

Poate va ieși un haos remarcabil

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